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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 06:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so much. Keep it going and update soon. Great chapter.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: The Panasonic Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
(This is a review of chapter one. If you would like a review for your other chapters, please submit them) I've read a lot of vampire fics before, but I have to say that I like this one (but I'm not sure if it would be considered AU, seeing as it happened after the actual show; then again, I haven't read the rest of the story yet). You seem to have a basic knowledge of vampire lore, which is good, because not many people do. The story so far is very enjoyable. I especially liked the cliffhanger at the end. It's the perfect way to get people to read more. Your sentance structure is a little choppy in the beginning, and the way you described how the gang turned out was a little too blunt. I think it would have been better if you gradually led into the lives of the others, instead of piling it all into what was basically one paragraph. Sure, the story seems centered around Seto, but the lives of the others seem important, so you shouldn't rush it. Your spelling and grammar are very good, so you don't need help with that. In fact, I would think you had a beta already. You just need someone to go over your sentence structure and smooth things out a little so that they flow better. I'm looking forward to reading more of this story in the near future. ~Pana
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I started reading it and lost it I am so glad I found it again. Update soon. Now that you are on my favorites list I won't lose you again.
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Reviewed By: Ktownchik2005 On: May 19, 2005 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome,awesome, awesome!!
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Reviewed By: Shawver On: May 16, 2005 17:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoah! ok, thats really hard to read O__o everything is just one big paragraph, and while i'm dying to see what happens, i just go cross eyes trying to read like that. could you change it? please??! ::puppy eyes::
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Reviewed By: koalared On: March 01, 2005 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutley love this fic. I love the AU world you've created. More please.
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Reviewed By: YEHUDIS On: February 09, 2005 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked that and i like the vampire thing and what i dont get is that didnt jou stay at school with seto and the others for along time or was it just high school that he and honda where there and also update as soon as you can please pleasee its hard to find relly good fics and the pairings i like
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 14:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Eh? Another Seto? *scratches head* Strange development... we should name him Youkai, or maybe Oni, or something demon-related. And if a sliver of red passed over Seto's eyes, wouldn't that make his eyes turn purple? Hee hee, it's food for thought...
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Title: Meep
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. been and while huh? Anyway, what or who was that? Heh.. must be the true vampire in Seto, I guess. It's kind of like an alternate personality. Sensui from Yu Yu Hakusho is like that, except there's 7 of them in there! (There meaning Sensui's mind). Getting back, poor Jou got scared out of his wits. xD I hope the war ends soon, and then the two of them can get down to some umm.. err stuff. =3 Please update again soon! This is still a personal favorite!
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 23:40 CST
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Ack! I just read through all these chapters, only to find you haven't finished! NOOOOOO! You can't do this to me! I absolutely love this fic! There is actually very little OOCness in here, and I like that so much... but the fact you cast Jou as a fairy? To tell the truth, I nearly peed my pants I was laughing so hard! The rest is more believeable than I originally thought... wel, except for the overgrown hamster ball... ROFLMAO Please, you haven't touched this story for over a month, please update soon! This is simply too good to let slide!
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Reviewed By: MrSbAnD [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH i agree the teasing is starting to drive me insane!!!! but its soooOOOooo good, WE WANT MORE!!!! please please write more......Seto is sooo cute!!!update and i will praise you!
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Title: Kick ass..
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've seen this story countless times on my searches for a good fic to read. Yet, I continuously shunned it. Probably because it was SetoxJou and I have only recently developed a deep interest for the pair. Bad me! But the past is the past, and this story kicks ass. The plot, and storyline and the character personalities are all awesome. Nothing is rushed, perfect. I love this world that you have created and I must say that I certainly wasn't expecting Jou to be a fairy, then Honda, and now Otogi. I am LOVING Seto's personality the most. I also like how you've done Jou's accent and not made it complete garbage. Such a good fic! I love it when I come across awesome stories like this. Still mad at the fact that I didn't read it from it's debut, but oh well. This is already a damn personal favorite. And I must side with Seto in asking.. WHEN THE HELL ARE THEY GOING TO SCREW??! I'm patient, I can wait. I love the little liplocks Seto keeps getting Jou into. The lift one was the sweetest. There's tape stuck on my sock :( and this fic kicks hard ass. Can't wait for the lemon, please update soon!!!
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Title: DAMN!
Reviewed By: Misha Misha On: September 30, 2004 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn, this story kicks ass! And Kaiba is so sexily seductive... I'm so jealous of Jounouchi. Damn him and his skimpy yumminess.... *licks lips*
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Reviewed By: Ryu Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 11:09 CDT
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Go, Seto! Feel the rage of a vampire, elves! *Laughs insanely* Yay for blood and gore! This is great! Violence galore! I love this fic! Keep writing it and I'll keep reading it!
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Reviewed By: Icysilverpill On: September 12, 2004 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yippee, you are continuing this fic. I am so glad. Just a note, what you use in your flashback in Chp 9, is not Old English, it is Middle English, like Shakespeare. Old English is more germanic and is not really recognizable as English to us. Sorry I'm a language buff. Anyway great fic, and I can not wait for the next chapter.
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