| "The Lemon Club" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... enjoyed reading it so far... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Update soon! I'm dieing to see what happens next! Peace!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are too good. you portray inu so well, and i love how you make kagome a little naughty! can't wait to see if inu gets the hint and kag makes her move. hmmm. should be interesting. 'till next time.
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Title: Porn Star
Reviewed By: angelabovefaith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great and so was your first chapter. Yes I am another person who thinks its Kagome thinking of Inuyasha. Can't help it! Well hope you update real soon cuz I want to know how yash is going to act around kagome now! update asap please!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
happy to see that you are writing again!! excellent one shot. definitely steamy. hmmm, who is she thinking of? btw, i read your bio. i hate that there are people out there that don't respect the fact that you have taken time out of YOUR life to write and share your kick@$$ stories with others then turn around and trash it. your fic ROAPH was great. your OC merrick was one of my favorites ever. i am truly sorry it happened that way. you should write what makes you happy, and when that happines is gone (taken from you) then it is a sad thing. on a lighter note, keep writing more i'm looking forward to it. *off to read your other new fic*
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Reviewed By: 8477 On: August 11, 2005 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great onshot make some Inu/Kag please oh and do u write any kinky stuff
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 03:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol that was sooo cool! Please keep up the great work. i look forward to reading more! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 14:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
That last line made me laugh. Well done, it's a nice pairing. Maybe I'll take you up on that challenge, though it won't be a lemon...
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Title: WOOOWEEEEE!!
Reviewed By: Sabichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, hell yes you get ten stars!! All I can say is, Evil Triplet is BACK!! Wonderful oneshot, this was just awesome. Really drew on the tension between Sess and Merrick from ROAPH, and that was ulitmately what all fans of their "pairing" have been waiting and wishing for-you know i have! Really, a great job! Ja ne! ~Sabichan~
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Reviewed By: New Guy On: May 08, 2004 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. That was incredible. Normally I'm the fluff type, but this was awesome!!!! Please update!!! The only reason I did not rate this a ten is beacuse of my prefering Fluff (a Kiss scence instead of Lemon). Your style was stunning and I liked the part about putting in whoever you wish the most. Just for the record, I was thinking of an Inu/Kag. They're my favorite pair ^^. Incredible story, looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: lilemmy On: April 20, 2004 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm turned on. In case your curious, I pictured Kagome and Inuyasha as the implied pairing. The claws and the 'bed' as opposed to a futon are what did it. Plus, they are my favorite pairing. You have a way with words and a naturally flowing style which quickly enables a reader to get lost in the world of your fanfics. Thank you for your fanfics. I do have a suggestion/request for another lemon shot, though. Don't ask me why this particular one because I frankly do not know. I think it is inspired by a passing moment in another Inuyasha fic I read somewhere...Oh well. My suggestion has to do with Kagome's short skirt. Let's just say that Inuyasha has something of a fetish bordering on an obsession with the skirt and what it implies. To begin with I would like to know your interpretation of Inuyasha's thoughts on Kagome's short skirt and how it effects him. I think I remember you doing something similar to this briefly in your other fic before Inuyasha and Kagome's first time together. When/If you develop the lemon shot to the point of, well, the lemonny goodness, please have Inuyasha ask Kagome to keep the skirt on. Everything else off, of course, but the skirt stays...at least initially. I leave such decisions and details up to your creative genius. So, Inuyasha's internal (& external) reactions to the skirt and his asking her to keep it on. That's it in a nutshell. Thank you for taking my suggestion under consideration. I greatly enjoyed this and Rider on a Pale Horse, which I read on FF.Net. You have a true talent for writing. Please write more when you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 04:58 CST
Comment/Review:
oo hot and steemy. ^_^ nice. i liked it. at first before i read it i thought it was a little short but now that i've read it i think it is just fine the length it is. and the fact that you can put in anyone you want was nice. it was a very good opening to a set of lemons. i personaly was thinking Kagome and Inuyasha. partly cause of the claws bit, but partly cause no matter what i think they will aways be my favoret pair. and now that i have effectivly stayed up till the sun came up the night before an art history exam in think i will go to bed. please write more stories! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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