| "In the End" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 (not signed in) On: December 22, 2005 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF? what is going on at the end? Is Kagome going to do something to him? And how exactly did she die from the shoulder wound? Was it massive blood loss or something? And how did she come back to life when she was dead in the first place? it kind of confused me a little bit...but all the same, I liked it I guess...just a lack of details here and there..and I really want to know what happens next...please? Luv Ty
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2004 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww sry but i'm slowly trying to read all ur works!!!
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_Hater [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 20:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
U R SOOOO EVIL! I WROTE A FIC JUST LIKE THAT & AM POSTING IT TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT MINE IS A TRUE DEATHFIC!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 16:30 CST
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i agree with that. I like this story!! But wait... what was Kagome holding behind her back??????
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Reviewed By: monsterkittie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've only read four chapters, but it's good. You got a tear from me while listening to my favorite Inuyasha ending theme. just a suggestion: double check chapter one. it repeats itself.
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