| "Heart of the Sea" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how you get Sesshomaru and Kagome together and if the curse is lifted.
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 21:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
o . o Now that I reread the part when they caught Kagome and when Naraku told Kagome to follow him to his room, I now think that either like before Naraku might sell Kagome to Kenjii or he could abuse her badly. O . O What a fate Kagome must endure if that would happen. And also when will Sesshoumaru appear in the story? Is he going to be some stray Kagome finds one day while going out on a task Kokolo sent her out to do, maybe he just some important man that comes one night to see Naraku about something and happens to see Kagome as a fox, or maybe some man Kagome finds in the forest at night, and she might come each night to give him company. Oh wow, I'm babbling. ^ - ^ Hehehe. Update soon.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: smalfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow,what an interesting premise to a story, I've never really read one like it yet it reminds me of a fairytale. I do hope you'll continue this story - I know its hard to keep up different plots and stories at the same time, but this is truly an intriguing idea! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! I just love your story!!! I hope Naraku doesn't hurt Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think what will happen next is that, Naraku might sell Kagome to Kenjii or something like that. Please update soon, the story just seem to get more interesting.
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Title: Chapter 1-7
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens to Kagome, if she is saved or if Naraku gets her.
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Title: hay cool story update please
Reviewed By: KiogoIceFoxFireWolfHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kiogo: hay that was a cool story please update. Shadow: it is cool so what with the cliff Kiogo: thay put it there so we'll reviwe tell them it cool and probly update. Shadow: well its better then yours. Kiogo: Shadow 5 seconds to run. Shadow: SEE YA *jumps up and runs for the door* Kiogo: 5..4..3..2..1..SEE YA!!! DIE SHADOW!!! * run after screming Shadow*
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Reviewed By: CrystalEyes SilverWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! *pouts* Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: lil_newrisk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it..but i want to know what happens...lol....I can't wait til you update this story
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