| "Attempted Fouls" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome Girl On: May 11, 2004 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!! ALSO MAKE INUYASHA AND KAGOME ADMITTTTTTTTTTTTTT THIER TRUE FEELINGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 not logged in On: April 25, 2004 10:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hee! Another good chapter!! Whoa... I totally freaked when I read what Inuyasha said about the flowers... I TOLD him not to eat all that sugar!!! lol... baka... ^_^;;
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Reviewed By: galene On: April 19, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol, very very cute... like the plotline ^_^ c ya Galene
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more. now. or i hurt you.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 not logged in On: April 19, 2004 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Another good one!! Arigatou! Oh, and energizer,damnit, the actual spelling that Rumiko Takahashi intended is Tetsuseiga. Sure it may be "easier" (by two letters) but it's not better.
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: energizer, damnit On: March 04, 2004 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT. XDDDDD and the spelling is Tessaiga or Tetsusaiga. lots of people debate about it, but i'd rather Tessaiga since it's easier and .. yeah. XD;; great story.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 On: February 22, 2004 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfic- hope you make some more! I can't wait to find out how Kagome's friends- especially Inuyasha- will greet the news that it was fake!!!
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Reviewed By: im2hot On: February 21, 2004 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
oh no poor inu!! good start keep writing and i think its one of the more original fics.^-^
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