| "Then From Love until Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: jc On: May 06, 2004 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
overall rating will go up 2 a 10 if u will pls lay a bit low on the angst! great plot, though i liked the first in the series better, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 15:52 CDT
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Dude! My jaw is still hanging right now... SERIOUSLY!! I CAN'T BELEIEIVE KOUGA! kOUGA WOULD DO LIKE SOMETHING LIKE THAT!HOLY HELL!! anyways update dude! i read your other thing,... 'from friendship to love' totally kool keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Inu13 On: May 01, 2004 19:33 CDT
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I only have one word to describe your story: WOW! This story is awesome! The only thing that I would change in your story is that I would have had Kagome shoot her arrow at Kikyo. I hope that BITCH DIES!! *Laughs like an insane person* 0_0 Ahem...anyways, your the author of the story so I guess what you wrote, had to happen so that the stroy would have a better plot. But of course if you have another chance to write something evil happen to Kikyo please do. But please I beg of you *goes on hands and knees* please don't write anymore Inu/Kikyo moments. I nearly broke my computer when I read the part were the kissed. *Shudders* That will give me nightmares tonight. Anyways, great story and update soon. And remember, please: NO MORE INU/KIKYO MOMENTS! Because if you do, *takes out a giant sword* I won't be held responsible for my actions! *_* Ja Ne! ^.^
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Reviewed By: black wolf girl (on ff.net) On: April 29, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i see that your saying tht your tired and dont want to check for grammar but i see that you have no problems with grammar or punctuation.everything is just perfect.anyway lets talk about your story.ok im happy you updated but im only a breath away from jumping into your story and killing kikyo with a bow+arrow and i know how to use them.i am training with them.anyway i really like your story and im not gonna rush you with updating.because if you rush someone everything just comes out all crappy.well update soon.sorry for the grammar in this review im a bit sleepy right now.^-^
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 01:14 CDT
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Okay I missed soooooo many chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why can't Sesshoumaru just sit Inuyasha and explain everything to him and they can still keep Kagome a sercret from Naraku but still let her be with Inu. Because I can't stand the way he's falling for Kikyou and how he still thinks she had nothing to do with Naraku's blackmailing, when is he going to find that out??? And did Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's mom every confront their dad about all the trouble he caused!?!?!?!? I find it odd that their mother out lived him even though she was the sick one but I would rather have her around than him. That is soooo sad that he doesn't even know that Destiny is his little girl and she doesn't know that he's her father!!! I really want to know who that woman is, could be Inu and Sess's mother?, I HOPE NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whoever she is I hope she is of some use and helps Kohaku. Please update soon, I promise not to miss another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Did I mention how much I am hating Kikyou right now!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh oo I smell trouble to come can't wait to find out what will happen next up-date again soon^_^
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Reviewed By: FeFe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 18:36 CDT
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Great chapter! I love all of the interactions between Inuyasha and Destiny. I really want to know Sango's and Miroku's reactions to her being Inuyasha's daughter. Keep writing as fast as you want to(but always keeping your readers in mind).
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 15:35 CDT
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So good, you must update!! Eagerly awaiting Kagome's and InuYasha's reunion.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon (not signed in) On: April 28, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOooOOOOO!!! how could he...dammit to hell! This can't be. This can't happen. you must update or i'm afraid that i will go nuts! i am so shocked! He killed Kagura...Will Kagome ever be happy? Can i kill kikyo? *holds up her scythe* please please! lol well keep up the good work and please update soon or i will shrivel up and blow away. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: FeFe (not logged on) On: April 21, 2004 22:51 CDT
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You are going to kill me. Please say Inuyasha will find out about her soon, or at least let her hang out with Sango as compensation for readers. I love the story. It is so fun and exciting but it is going to be driving me mildly insain while Kikiyo is still in the picture. I can't wait till either Inu or Kagome kick the crap out of her in some way. PLEASE UPDATE SOON (but at your own pace, of course)
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 22:53 CDT
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You have to finish this!!!!
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 21:03 CDT
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I want you to know that this is a great story. Please update. I want to know what's going to happen. I should have reviewed your other story, the one this is a sequel too, if I didn't I will. It was a great story!!
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Reviewed By: keisha On: April 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I can forgive you as long as they don't sleep together because if they do I think I may have to find you and put you out of your misery ;)
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Reviewed By: Raven Black On: April 17, 2004 20:04 CDT
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It is about time she remembers. Rin had better let Inuyasha know what is going on. also who was with Naraku. Kikyo better not get down and dirty with Inuyasha or I am going to turn into a mad chiken and go nuts!! ^_^
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Title: Just Exceptional!
Reviewed By: Devil Incarnate [Not logged in] On: April 16, 2004 20:52 CDT
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just beautiful! I love the way you write and you are the author, you know best. I bet that kiss was just to make things more interesting later on in the story.
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