| "Then From Love until Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu13 On: May 22, 2004 19:51 CDT
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WHAT!? A CLIFFY! How could you make Rin get shot! I mean the way Inuyasha and Kagome were reunited was excellent (It almost made me cry) but when Rin got shot, it made me upset. I mean...is she gonna be okay? Will the baby survive? And more importantly...WHO SHOT HER? Anyways, I hope you update real soon, 'cause I want to know what will happen to Rin, and what will Sesshy do. And I also would like to know what will happen to Inuyasha and Kagome? UPDATE SOON!
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Title: foxy_kitsune2001@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: foxy kitsune {not logged in} On: May 21, 2004 22:24 CDT
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OMG!!! That was the best thing I've ever read!! It took me 45 minutes just to read that because it was so mushy and gushy. But I loved it anyway! By the way I know it was Kikyo who did it.Please don't let anything happen to the baby. It may be her last chance to even have one. You know how lucky she is to even be pregant even after the doctors said she couldn't have any. Ps. Did you know that you could get this fanfic published? All you have to do is change the names to real more normal names (like Jake or Katie etc.). I know alot of people would want to publish it.Also yuo should maybe write a short story about what happened the 2 years before she was kidnapped. PPS. Did you ever wonder why they said kidnapped when an adult was missing?
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Reviewed By: Hsiwu On: May 21, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love inuyasha's and kagome's reunion except for the fact that inuyasha's mother got shot.
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Title: From Love until Forever
Reviewed By: Mangetsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful... you made this old lady cry.
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Title: UM....
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:04 CDT
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sorry, didn't mean to leave that twice, this stupid thing wouldn't take my first review!!
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Title: OH
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:03 CDT
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MY..... GOODNESS.... AWESOME is the ony word to describe that. Now you need a really good lemony scene for their reunion. Oh, but whatever happened to Rin would put that on hiatus for a while, eh? Great, keep up the good work and UPDATE!!!
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Title: OH
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:03 CDT
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MY..... GOODNESS.... AWESOME is the ony word to describe that. Now you need a really good lemony scene for their reunion. Oh, but whatever happened to Rin would put that on hiatus for a while, eh? Great, keep up the good work and UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Bob_the_youkai On: May 20, 2004 20:24 CDT
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*SCREAMING IN HORROR* Oh gods!!!! what happens!?!?!?! she...but...i...you... and...oh geez!!!! you really do know how to keep us on our toes!!! please update soon soon soon!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVIL CLIFFY.EVIL.EVIL.EVIL.I TELL YOU IT'S EVIL.but yay Inu and Kag are back toget her and now they're one big happy family.........and Rin better not lose the baby or die nope she's to kewl of a character for her to die and her personality would go bye bye if she lost the baby cause her spirit would be crushed...o please please please up-date soon I nead t,no I have to find out what happens next....this story is my life line^^
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Reviewed By: chmsweety(mari) On: May 20, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't stop there!!why did you had to shoot rin!! please don't let rin die!
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Title: OMFG!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ming_ming On: May 20, 2004 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG... I've been meaning to write sometime now, I Printed the prequel to this one, and read it, practically every day, I fell in love with it, seriously, I almost did my Independent Reading Portfolio for my Literature Class on your fanfic!, (( Problem is, the *cough*NC-17*cough* and the fact that it is online, it had 2 be a book )) The way your write, altho I'm more into descriptive writing, summoned the devoted reader in me, seriously, you just use the perfect tones, the perfect words 4 everything!... I just can't say how happy I am, about being so lucky on finding your fanfic!. I just wanted to make like two suggestions. The transition from "From friendship to love" to the beginning of this fic, is way to long, altho you explained what happened, and some flashbacks, still, I feel as I NEED to see how happy both of them were douring those two years, and how the heck did Naraku Plan all that. Not to mention KIKYOU!!! OMG you don't know how eager Am I to just look at her face and say "Looser!! nanananana!!! get the heck outta here!!! " also some details of the honeymoon, and the last time before her dissapearance ;D would be good. ((*kicks herself* xP soory, Lemon-adict )) Also you shoudl feel proud, Your fanfic is the fist I read without caring about the NC-17 part! (Not that I don't like it!! *Bows* U Rule!!! )) Poor Rin!! I hope nothing happends to the Baby... :| I hate to be cliffhanged!!! Please update soon!!!! U RULE *BOWS* Sayonara!!
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Reviewed By: Katina108notsignedin On: May 20, 2004 13:22 CDT
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oh my gods.. you had me crying.. I just.. oh my goodness... I was so happy for them, and now.. and now... Rin.. oh my gods... stop doing this to ME!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 20, 2004 11:31 CDT
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Can't...say...anything...too...shocked...*runs from room sobbing*
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: darkangelNBS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it i think its as good as the first one or even better
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Title: Rin GOT SHOT?!?
Reviewed By: (Taka) On: May 20, 2004 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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