| "Will you be mine?" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fainus On: July 20, 2004 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure if you posted this chapter on fanficion.net, so I'm not sure if I've reviewed it yet. But just in case I haven't, I want to say that I think this is an excellent chapter. I really have enjoyed this story so far, and I hope it is not close to being over yet. I can't wait till you update again! -Fainus
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 19:18 CDT
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Thats so stupid. How is a runaway sence too graphic??? And why didn't the webmaster just read the chapter for him or herself and see that it was harmless? FF.net is so stupid I don't know why authors even post their stories there. The same thing has been happening to other authors like amyfushigiyugi, Youkai Yume, and Niamh. I'm really starting to think someone is doing this for their own reasons and not because the stories were breaking the rules. This is exactly why I never even go to that site let alone put my stories up on it.
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Reviewed By: scarletraven1001*notsignedin On: July 19, 2004 18:33 CDT
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ff.net deleted your ENTIRE account?! that is so mean! i got a story deleted in the same damn site once, and it really sucked beans, so i guess getting deleted, as in totally deleted sucks all hell into a hole. damn. take your time with the repostings, we won't push you. anyway, i'm glad i found this fic today, it's really good. so please, try to update once you can. ja ne!
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Title: FF,net
Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 08:11 CDT
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Dont worry about them over there. Apparently, they have gone on a deleting spree and taken everyones accounts without warning if you excede the 'R' rating over there. As to what they consider 'R' I have no idea at this point. My advise to you is to repost everything and then in chapters that are even the slightest bit questionable, tell them to come here to view it under your name or give them a link because of the content of the chapter. Im sorry about your reviews, that hurts, I know. I lost a oneshot, by my own accord, that had a lot of reviews. Just know that our hearts go out to you and were all pulling for you.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(n.s.o.) On: July 18, 2004 01:06 CDT
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It was short, but sweet! *yawn* Sometimes I think Sesshoumaru says stuff like that because he likes to see Inuyasha get mad *yawn* must sleep now, bye bye green pizza! *snore*
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Title: That kicked ass.
Reviewed By: Kaythan On: July 13, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. I imagined everything coming to my mind as if it were a movie. The only thing is, you need to work on your spelling. Your grammar is perfectly fine. I don't personally enjoy your style too much, but the creativity was amazing. You should write a lemon between Inuyasha and Kagome after Kagome forgives him. Uh...if she forgives him anyway. Please continue as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: VeRoN [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 22:42 CDT
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Ok, I am not going to say update cause i know it can be hard...but it was just so sad..i mean..poor Inu and Kag, they deserve to be together! Anyway, great chap, I hope to be reading more of this fic soon.
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 11:34 CDT
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Awww so sad> Poor Inu...Great chapter. UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 09:53 CDT
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yay! you update! i really like the last chappie you just did, it's really awesome... I wonder how Kagome and Inu Yasha will make up?! Update as soon as possible plz!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemones(n.s.o.) On: July 10, 2004 01:35 CDT
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I thought I was the only person up this late? But anyway, that cliffy was evil!!! Evil I tell you!!!!! I'm not speaking to you again until you update *crosses arms and points nose in the air like Inuyasha*
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Reviewed By: earthshine411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 19:02 CDT
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Cute story. I'm enjoying it! Hope you update soon; I want to see how this all works out. Will Naraku have his way with Kagome? Will Yash persuade the King so he can have Kagome? Maybe the King'll hold a contest between Yash and Naraku, for Kagome's hand? Only time will tell... ^.^
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 14:59 CDT
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It was cute. How they first met. Hahahah she tricked him didn't she?!?! LMAO! LoL...Well cute chapter!!! Update soon please..
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 03, 2004 01:36 CDT
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I thought it was soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 23:23 CDT
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aaaaaaaawwwwww i can just picture them as kids too lol. kagome looks like a bully
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Reviewed By: Pyro Pixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 19:42 CDT
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Hey this is pretty damn good I like it alot and will continue to read it, update at your own pace. Oh I have a question for you is Rin human in this story or what?
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