| "A New Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
loves it...the only thing is that its kinda all over the place...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_Hater [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 12:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
...UR FIC IS GOOD EXEPT...KIKYO WILL NEVER GET INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!! WHEW, HAPPY TO HAVE THAT OUT OF MY SYSTEM!
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Title: More Please!
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic. I started reading it and I couldn't stop to the point where I missed dinner...oh well ^_^ You must write more soon yes? please pretty please.
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Title: Great Story!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kikyo_kagura_koga_fan_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very good story very exciting!!!:Di hope u write a few more chapters soon:D p.s it was wierd when inuyasha bit kikyo lol!!!:D but very wrong it depends on how u think abt it.
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Title: I like it!
Reviewed By: SeSsYs RiNcHaN [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2004 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your story, it's just that the first couple fo words of some of the sentances are cut off. It's hard to read that way, and I sometimes can't even read what your saying. o.O Well, I still love the fic! Continue ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Champion123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm... I like your story so far but the Chapters are really missed up. The beginning of the most of the new lines are cut off. can you e-mail me the stroy form chapter one to chapter 7 so I don't miss anything. E-mail me at PureCountry1287@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Kouga_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good update soon well except that theres like an error in the left side of the chapter it doesnt show like 1-2 words like for EX: "went to blah blah" ^ doesnt show 'she'
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon, I love it please
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH ME LIKEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH OH U MUST REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPPIE HURRRYYY!!!
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