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| "I Guess I Need You Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: spini! On: July 18, 2005 03:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow it´s so beautiful...I´m speechless! Love it
| Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't understand why more people haven't reviewed this! It's absolutely beautiful! One of the most emotional, wonderfully deep one-shots I've ever read!
| Title: mack_muffy@hotmail.com my name is actually Punky Monkey
Reviewed By: Monkey Pal On: February 23, 2004 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! That was very very good! It was a nice idea,and you did it well. I liked the honesty and yet the originality in it, and I liked how you kept everything in tact. It was interesting to read, and it makes you think about that subject. I think that was really what might of happened in the show. But, I don't think Vegeta would have been too happy about a baby. Maybe later in the serise, but not at that point, or at least, not very openly. Farting in the toilet! LOL I think you need to be a little more delicate with the matter. Oh well. It was very well done. I love the description with the Bulma and Vegeta kissing scene. You've really been coming along as an author. Keep on writing. It's cool that you have the whole B/V get together thingy showing Yamcha's side of the story, and yet keeping it B/V related. It was very warming and deep, and very true. It started out sad, but ended making you feel fresh.
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