"Hidden Past, Hidden Self" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 23:20 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is awesome so far, I've just finnished chapter 7, and it's got 22 more to go!!! I hope it has an ending though cuz so many that I have read I really like but they are not written with any closure. That may be the way the author meant to leave it but I like to feel like there is some semblance of and end...anyway, this story is very intricate so far, very discriptive and imginative. I am thrilled with the original characters and the depth of involvement in the storyline; I love that you give them a detailed background. I can't wait to read the rest of this as I have added it to my favorites as well as you as one of my fave authors!!! Great work!!!
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 02:24 CDT Comment/Review: BTW, this is the first 10 I've ever given, plenty of 8's and 9's but no 10's til now!
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Reviewed By: tinita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 02:21 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is awesome so far, I've just finnished chapter 7, and it's got 22 more to go!!! I hope it has an ending though cuz so many that I have read I really like but they are not written with any closure. That may be the way the author meant to leave it but I like to feel like there is some semblance of and end...anyway, this story is very intricate so far, very discriptive and imginative. I am thrilled with the original characters and the depth of involvement in the storyline; I love that you give them a detailed background. I can't wait to read the rest of this as I have added it to my favorites as well as you as one of my fave authors!!! Great work!!!
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Title: ^_^ Reviewed By: Silver Inu On: July 09, 2005 08:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love your story! It's really good and gave me ideas for my own things! ^_^ i really hope you continue it! sorry i didn't review last time it slipped my mind while i was reading. You're THAT good! have you concidered being a writer? your own stories and your own charecters. I mean just make your story with your created charecters. it'd be great! i'd deffinatly buy a book like that! XD Well i have to continue my sister's god damned babysitting with a five year old and a two year old so PLEASE write more PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE *gets on knees bowing and begging* PLEASE WRITE MORE! ^____________________________________^ you are da bomb!
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 17:31 CDT Comment/Review: Very interesting, hope to see a new chap up soon to tell me what happens. Oh yeah by the way good chapter. *Queen of Cuteys*
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 17:24 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: good job on your new chapter, I really enjoyed it. I'm sorry for not reading it sooner but gettin on my mom's computer is alot of work. My stepdad makes up any stupid reason that mom wont alwo me to use her computer. Stupid I know, but I'm really looking foward to see what happens next. Up date soon! * Queen of Cuteys *
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 22:12 CST Comment/Review: Great chapter, hope you get a chance to update soon. OH! and sorry it took me so long to read the chap, my computer's still on the fritz.*Queen of Cuteys*
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Reviewed By: QoC On: November 16, 2004 20:26 CST Comment/Review: Kane sorry to say it but I think you're going just a little too far with the whole new half sister thing. I'm not certain, but it seems a little to big with all these siblings. * Queen of Cuteys *
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 19:59 CST Comment/Review: O' corse I write reviews. Your a great writer and I find it mean when people don't coment of the chapters that take so long to think of. Besides I find it anoying when people don't review for my story even thought it dose suck. I don't cair if I get fires, I like reading other people's coments. And another good chapter award gos to.... Kane-sakura! Great chap. Keep going. ;)
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Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 13:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great Chapter! I really think it nice of your school to let you type the chap. on their computers. I would ask only my computer doesn't have a flopy drive, and that'a all they have as far as disks go. Can't whait till you have a chance to write another chapter.
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Title: The Movie Reviewed By: Queen of Cuteys [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 19:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's reaqlly good you it'd be better when you know exactly who all the new charicotrs are. (case your wondering according to me your spelling is waaaaayyy better.)
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Title: dgirlie Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 20:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love your story...keep it up...i like the little sister idea....is there gonna be any romance ^____^???
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Reviewed By: milerna On: March 16, 2004 18:46 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i really like your story i think everyone who read the chapters that wrote already will be pleased.pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update
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Title: I READ IT!! Reviewed By: SiriousB1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 20:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, I read it (as promised!). I liked it a lot...a little cliched, but that's only to be expected. It's good for a first piece of writing. A suggestion/comment? I think your character took the whole idea of being a half demon a bit too easily. Sure, she was crying and stuff, but her questions and "calmness" weren't really convincing. A REALLY good thing, though, was your spelling and grammar. Most people who start out have TERRIBLE grammar, but I only found one or two mistakes. Good job! My school has a solo and ensemble competition coming up too! I was going to enter, but I didn't feel like finding a song. ^_^;; That's kinda creepy...that we both have competitions like that going on, rather. Coooool...
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Reviewed By: CrazyDevil100 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 18:32 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really liked this story!^^Please update!^^
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