| "Take Me Away" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Take Me Away
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like please update soon !!
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Reviewed By: Mermaid Ninja On: February 29, 2004 14:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue. Who's the mother? Is the master Naraku? Will Kagome and Sango be rescued or escape? Oh, and by the way, you spelled "threw" wrong.
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Title: what the!?!
Reviewed By: jugglo On: February 27, 2004 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i like the way the story started lets just hope it doesn't take the wrong turn
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Title: Me wanna see more
Reviewed By: Bootie On: February 27, 2004 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story please hurry up with chapter 2 please hurry you stupid skank If you don't I'll never ever read any more of your stories Well i might not it depends great story ^____^
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Reviewed By: Outai Urufu On: February 23, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm..... you have my interest peaked as to how you're going to go with this... I like many things about this story, but the only thing I have to say that needs work is to make you chapters longer (Of course I haven't written any fics yet, so what would I know) Anyways, don't let it die!
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Reviewed By: Silen_Miko_Killer On: February 23, 2004 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this fanfic is going to be really good. It got me wondering how are they going to treat her and why they want her. I hope to see more chapters up soon! ^_________^
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Title: hmm...
Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 04:36 CST
Comment/Review:
well... now i kind of wonder how this fic is going to turn out... is it one of those she will be under 'my'rule until of age or will the try to kill her but then someone says let her stay with me... or do they raise her as their own child... now it makes me wonder... i like good job continue
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Reviewed By: lovin it On: February 22, 2004 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this chapter was kid abreathe takin, i wouldn't mind see'in some more later on in the future later *_*
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