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| "Shadows are casted, love is broken" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 17:53 CST
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Hey taltos, sure i can wait, thanks for responding to my request, your the best, well one of the best writers here.
| Title: Heh- heh...^__~
Reviewed By: Taltos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 18:33 CST
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Lesse...um, sure. No guarantees, though... I mean, at the moment, I don't have access to PhotoShop, so it could be a bit. Is that okay?
| Title: Zoid
Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 17:25 CST
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Sorry about te cut off. ANy way, i would particulary like some battle scene art and some art of fiona and van, oh and the song, which is made up by me, the band exists but its my band the band has nothing to do with the song though, the song is like a Fiona-Van provocitive, from their view. please people R&R before art
| Title: Zoid
Reviewed By: Zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 17:21 CST
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Hello Taltos, and all the other readers, listen, i'm not very good on creating computer art, so i would like it if some mediaminer member like you Taltos or ravenwings and others could make fan art of this story, like some b
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Taltos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. I really wanted to comment on your story. I thought that it was really original, which is actually new for me. Over on my usual stomping grounds, everything is very...bland. -_- So, this was nice for me. You had a very grammar problems, but nothing huge. The one thing that always gets me is the format. The way that all your dialogue and...stuff...is bunched up? I can barely read it. And I hate that, because I love your idea. Um...the song (good song, I know it) was a bit distracting. Maybe if you'd distributed it throughout some more action...? Anyways, all and all, definitely above average.
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