| "The End" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Kusoi (Hazel) On: July 30, 2004 16:30 CDT
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I knew you could finish it Alana! Great job too. It was so sad, how could you end it that way ;_; Anyways good read, Im off to read the next one you sent me.
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Title: The Shinigami Temptress
Reviewed By: Jadie-sama On: July 28, 2004 06:44 CDT
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You are one evil, EVIL person. HOW CAN YOU KILL HIM LIKE THAT!!!!!!GRRRRR.... Atleast you are writing a sequel. WRITE FASTER!!!! God, you can tell I love it, eh? Great job and keep up the good work. :P ~*~Jade~*~
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Reviewed By: yugi'sgurl On: February 26, 2004 19:40 CST
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^__________________________________________^ that's soooooooooooooooo so sad, it made me cry, ^.^ it was good though, update onto further chapters
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Title: Woah
Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww that was sad i feel really sry for Yami. But at least Yugi is there to hold him now^^ I love them both and this fanfic! I can't believe he was killed, just wait till i get my hands on that lady, and marik...i think that was him controling him right, i don't remember...oh well great fic!!!
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Reviewed By: Jadie-sama On: February 26, 2004 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My actual Overall Rating is 9 1/2 but the thing wouldn't let me do 1/2s. That was soo sad *sniff* even if I didn't have a clue about half of the things, i got the point. please update soon! its really good (tho there are a few errors). keept up the work Thorn. lolah -K
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Reviewed By: Md On: February 25, 2004 21:23 CST
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ur right it was sad, it almost make me cry, T_T, u should update though okies?
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Reviewed By: JJStars Yami Karasu On: February 25, 2004 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
* sobs* That was so sad...but I can't wait for the next one!!! werid aren't I, but please write more!
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Reviewed By: shadowsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good!So sad...Please review soon! I can't wait to read the others.Keep up the good work!
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