| "Secrets withheld in Love" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: WCInsane On: July 30, 2007 21:08 CDT
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well...that was different....hrmm...methinks I need to follow along for a lil' longer to see if I like it or not. But good thus far.
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Reviewed By: Codan On: March 05, 2006 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so Fantastic! What are Heero and Zechs up to? Is it actually anything to do with the Russian government? Please update!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 09:12 CST
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I love this story so far. How will Duo find out that she is actually a he? And what does Heero want with him anyways? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Backward [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 11:07 CST
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Yay!!! Its good and i'm now very very intrigued with whats going to happen!! And we all know why Duo goes into a nervous silence when He-chan's around! Its luuurve!!!! write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Mite Mite [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and update! Two chapters is not enough!
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Reviewed By: Jesuismoi On: August 04, 2004 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, I'm Frensh so I can't judge your grammar and spelling but I love all your stories ! It isn't easy to find stories where Heero isn't a strong and cold man, he's too often insensitive in the fanfictions. I like the way you describe him in all your stories... To conclude, I would say that you have a fantastic imagination and that I'm waiting for your updates impatiently,,, Sorry for my bad English...
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:17 CDT
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Reviewed By: tarigarma5 On: June 18, 2004 19:01 CDT
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how can you be so bad¡¡¡¡¡¡ you take too much to update¡¡¡ plezzzz finish it soon it is going pretty well I liked it so much
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Reviewed By: Chibi Cherrie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 03:59 CDT
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Reviewed By: sevun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUNH DUNH DUNH and the plots thickens. I love the story so far..and a sluttly evil (but-not-really-evil) Heero is so adorable. The blond curls took me by surprise, that is definitely an interesting look :) Hope you can update soon.. *literally sitting on the edge of the seat*
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Reviewed By: ep-chan On: June 16, 2004 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HI!! ya an update... man this is good!! *giggles* hmm ..-revealing an expanse of her cleavage and a peek of satin lace from her bra-... lol must be a push up bra. update soon!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 11:50 CDT
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yo!! *i seems to be saying that alot* man I had a feeling this would be a good story and I think it will be... gee I think there's a bit of hesitation on Heero's part on hurting Duo, I think he liking him more and more... gee I wonder if Heero just knows how to control his blushes or could I consider them as an indication of what he feels, well what I think he's starting to feel for duo is real. *does a little dance in lue of next update*
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 03:18 CDT
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arg..concerning my review....Mediaminer did not split it up where it was supposed to... There was supposed to be a line break between what Duo and Heero said...arg arg arg! >_< *kicks MM* Anyway, just hit enter after a character finishes talking, and before a new character starts to speak... Don't put more than one character talking at a time in a paragraph. Yep. Okie, bye bye!
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Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 03:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it certainly seems interesting so far. Some constructive crit you may want to consider, however, is that..well..whenever a new person speaks, you are supposed to create a new paragraph. Meaning it would be: "lalalala," says Duo. "blah blah blah," says Heero. That's just the grammatically correct way of doing it... Otherwise, it gets confusing. Which..I'm sorry, but it did get confusing in your fic a few times because you have two or more people talking in one paragraph... Heh.. But, like I said, it seems to be very interesting thus far. I look forward to seeing more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Backward [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is this like revealed destiny where heero's pretending to be a girl?? cause if it is that's allways good, and when duo finds out *evil grin* even better!! please please carry on soon!!! 8puppy dog eyes* pleeease!
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