| "Chocolate Love" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: grey hanako On: November 09, 2004 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
That was one very hot scene. Well written with just the right amount of humor at the end to make it more than just sex. Though I have to say the sex was great. Nice idea. :) Gambatte ne.
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Reviewed By: SKF13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Funny ending! *twisted grin*
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Reviewed By: bulma breifs On: April 03, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that waz so good lol keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 17:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like all of ur stories. This was a good one about Midvally and Lagato. There aren't to many fics about them paired up. Keep updating!
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