| "Eien Ni Nakunatta Shunkan: A Moment Lost Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 268 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nema On: June 14, 2004 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's hard to believe that this chapter is your first attempt at an actual lemon as it was done amazingly well. So don't knock yourself as you are a heck of a lot better than a lot of the fan fic writers out there. Again, a great addition to an already wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: *speechless* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 01:14 CDT
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eh *wimpers* your evil... *starts to cry* but also wonderful...I love your fanfic so far! Please update soon! And I really am glad that theMaven mentioned yourfan in one of her stories or I probably wouldn't have found yours ever or for a while. p.s. thanks a bunch for all the new japanese vocab! haven't learned any new words or phrases in a while. *goes back to crying while waiting for more chapters*
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Title: I love this story!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! You have written one of the best Sess/Rin fics I have ever read (besides the ones by theMaven if you don't mind me saying). I really like! Ooh! I sense some naughtiness coming up in the next chapter... tee hee ;) I might just have to skip some of it... *thinks about it* nah! Maybe just a little. I'll skim it and see if I can handle it. Lol ;) -RayJay
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Title: You've done it again
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 15:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It just doesn't get any better than that ^__^ Far too many good things happened in this chapter to comment on individually, but I'll pick out a couple--interesting insight in what it feels like to be a Naraku detachment who's being reabsorbed and Rin's reaction to a dripping wet, half-naked Sess was priceless. I won't press you for a fast update considering your real life obligations, but I'm anxious to see if you'll live up to your own expectations . . . You know what I mean . . . "You Shook Me All Night Long" ^__-
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Reviewed By: Ashlee On: May 23, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it. please come out with the next chapter i've been checking for the last 3 days and it has the same amount of pages please update soon!!! by the way i love you fic. ƒ¿ƒ Ö¿Ö
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Reviewed By: Madartiste On: May 19, 2004 13:35 CDT
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Ah! What a great chapter. You're doing a great job keeping the flow and characterization consistant. Sesshoumaru's conflicted emotions seem spot on. The chapters are all a good length for what needs to happen within them (even though I'd love to read more. ^-^). I especially liked the scene on the beach - it was very vivid and just plain fun to read. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz Plz Plz update I have to take finals and state test for the nex 31/2 weeks. I'll die without something to do. *cry* PLZ..... Love your story with heart and soul. Great plot, though Sess is a little mushy, like marshmellows, but he's really more like white choclate. I'll stop with the candy references. Keep writting TTFN
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Reviewed By: kumag On: May 12, 2004 02:29 CDT
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Great chapter. Like the way Sesshomaru's feelings are all conflicted and such. Same as Rin's. Keep up the good work. Matta ne
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Title: Aww, isn't that sweet?
Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Curse Jaken and his poor timing! lol That was a SWEET chapter. Sess is quite attractive when he's unsure (excellent first kiss), and Rin is just as charming as ever (I like sweets, too). Sharing a bed is a good way to get to know somebody, and their trip to the beach was a real treat. It was funny reading about all of Koga and Ayame's cubs--kinda reminds me of my family, lol. And I can just imagine Jaken helping her into all her layers . . . hehe . . . that has to be a sight, lol, neither one of them being sure what it's supposed to look like. But I'm sure Sess will like it *wink-wink*
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha_Offline On: May 11, 2004 23:12 CDT
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Wheee! Not only was it cute, fluffy and filled with wonderfulness, but I get a word! Sweet...love the chapter, can't wait for more!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not signed in) On: May 11, 2004 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you wrote such a lot! its an awesome chappie!~ i love the song and how sappy they were though its a lil OCC but oh well. great stuff!!
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Title: Thank you for updating!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 17:31 CDT
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Yay! What a yummy chapter! I loved it! The warm and fuzzy was perfect because it's so cute-ah! Thank you thank you thank you!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 03:33 CDT
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this is a damn good fanfic please update soon
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Title: so beautiful...
Reviewed By: asiancherries [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 02:06 CDT
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you write very well. as a college writing tutor for 3 years, i can say this with great confidence. reading your chapters is always a delight, because a good story is made so much better by a good writer. keep it up!
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Title: Dooby Dooby Doo GAWSH I am so confused
Reviewed By: Inuyashas Princess17 (not in) On: May 06, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so confused about the chapter number I am reviewing...so I will just review normally i guess. GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!! I am loving Sess and Rin back together...things are looking extremely interesting, can't wait for more...please update when you can. ~Inuyasha's Princess17
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