| "No Where To Run" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bitch of the Highway Thieves [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic. Update soon. Oh, and never apologize for any mistakes you make as an author. Every mistake you make pushes you a little further along on the road to becoming perfect ^_~! Besides, no one's perfect. Even still, UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: October 02, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bungaloo is the pathetic one! the only reason he even has an account on this website was so he could review you! did you notic before he didnt have an account and then to back up what he said about no one on this page had an account. now THATS pathetic....but you know what? the real reason why im reviewing was to tell you that you did AWESOME and bungaloo is a DICK! plz keep writing good stories!
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Title: Nice story going on
Reviewed By: Bashoooshi On: September 29, 2004 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I read lots of lemon stories but I'm not perv and I'm a girl....I love your stories even tho I don't understand some of it since you don't know lots of english..I understand you because my first language was japenese,korean then engliish so I'm not too worried about your spellings..I'm pretty sure that you'll learn lots of english by writing fanfics or stories and I belive that you don't have a computer so you went to PC to post your fanfics...Well if I'm wrong about something and made you upset or anything I'm sorry.
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Reviewed By: Saphir Kitsune Youkai Girl On: September 28, 2004 20:11 CDT
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You're doing great so far!!! Keep going like this and you'll definitely have a reader as long as your story is on! Just watch out for the spelling mistakes, 'kay? I won't review every chapter, God knows I'm too lazy for that, but I'll keep reading for sure!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U little twit how can u end it like that leave a girl on edge again man do u just enjoy doing this!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 28, 2004 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chap! Will there be a reunion any time so?
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Title: w0w
Reviewed By: cute_e_pie999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amazing! lol i just loved it! lol don't take the spelling & grammar to heart, u REALLY made up for it in the enjoyment factor, & that's the one that counts! ^_^ please update SOON! lol
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON OK PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kiyari On: August 24, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AUG!!!!!!!!!! you stupid GIT!!! you have to review your leaving me hanging man!!!!! Any way i love the story and PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok see ya ~kiyari~
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Title: I LOVE YOUR STORY!
Reviewed By: petz lover On: May 22, 2004 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the lemon in chap2. i'am going to read chap3,so bye.
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Title: Despite the Flames...
Reviewed By: CrystalEyes SilverWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...it is very interesting. It is understandable that you make mistakes because you are learning! All I have to say is to read it before you post, make the chapters longer(please T_T), and continue writing no matter how consistent some people are with their corny reviews. It is quite sad how many stupid people out their flame potential stories that could flourish into lovely blossoms! Please continue, for this is very interesting!
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: April 25, 2004 21:16 CDT
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now i see why people like sess/kag stories but i still like inu/kag over and out.
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Reviewed By: Bungaloo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 12:25 CST
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Look at this, you don't even update enough to check your reviews!! How slow can one person be!? Wow...your stupidity and slowness amazes me. Sometimes I wonder if you ride the short yellow bus to school...Do you even go to school? Are you against grammar? *shakes head in disgust* Shame on all you reviewers who actually gave this story a ten. Are you people nuts? I can't even understand most of the sentences. That's how bad you are. You cannot tell me those are typos. You spelled most of your words wrong, and it was spelled wrong throughout the entire story. Unless somehow, you can make the exact same typos over and over again then I highly suggest you learn English. Your story is so corny. I bet if you asked someone with common sense to read it, even they can't help but notice its stupidity. -Bungaloo
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Reviewed By: Bungaloo On: March 29, 2004 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
*brain (typo) And most of your reviews are by people who don't even have accounts in MM. That means some random person could have been posting these for the hell of it. Either that or you are desperate enough to review your own story!! Pa-the-tic!
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Title: Don't you know anything?
Reviewed By: Bungaloo On: March 29, 2004 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give you a zero, but one is the lowest. :( Do you even go to school!? If so, what the HELL do they teach you there? How to annoy people with your stupid grammar mistakes? I highly suggest you stop writing fanfics until you can actually get correct grammar in most of your words. Either that, or get a braink, because you sure as hell don't have one. Geez, horrible...just horrible. I can't believe you actually got some good reviews for your corny story. People these days...desperate enough to go and read horrible fanfics like these. You give fanfics a bad name!!!
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