| "Prima Facie" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 05:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Such a sad story. Will there be a happy part? Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY ****! This is really good! No, wait, not good. Awesome, not exactly perfect 'cause you do have some little doosies.
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Reviewed By: Deamon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 16:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
what would be you user for aff.net *snicker*
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Title: Heart Break
Reviewed By: dam it On: February 27, 2004 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's heart warming and when the character is feeling pain she makes the reader feels it too in the way she writes it. I love her writing style and she really gets me in the mood of her story and not alot of writers can do that. A must read this story relates to all couples, friends, secret lovers. It made my heart BEAT...and it made my heart skipped beats...i made me wanna cry thinking of the pain of seeing the one u love with another. Looking forward to reading more.
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