| "Endless Battles Of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Title: Miroku&Inuyasha!!
Reviewed By: Cray [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2011 02:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, this story was so goddamn funny, I'm reading it 5:00 in the morning and people waking up thinking something wrong with me. I thought that Miroku and Inuyasha had the best lines, when kikiyo showed up at the club I almost died laughing my ass off "somebody gonna die" that was almost too funny. I love how you put a Chris rock joke In there too! I love this, but you need to stretch out the love scenes it make Inuyasha look like a minute man! Lol. Well I loved it and I'm glad that I read it, next time add more jokes cause I can tell you funny as hell!! |
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
"I'm stubborn Miroku." "And I'm persistent Sango." loving it!!!
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Title: LAST ONE TO READ THIS... I Think
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story... So many great things in the plot and alll... makes me cry how it ended- like the last chapters were really cheesy but such a tear jerker and squealer! I'm happy to know that everyone got what they deserved in the end... Great job on this story and it definitely showed how much you grew as a writer. In the beginning my mind just couldn't get past the name brand clothing which were maaaaaad ghetto! But now, I seen that the favored young adults grew out of the slutty outfits and the baggy clothing into somewhat more decent but alluring clothing and fitting sizes... I sorta wished to know what's up with the younger cast, you know Shippo and all of them but then again there's no real story behind that! lolz, the only parts that threw me off was the description of how much time has passed and stuff like that... the only question I need to be answered is if everyone got their degree and education and what are they doing with their lives... other than that I say you have an awesome banging story and my eyes were happy to fall upon it! Looking forward to other works! YOUR NEW FAN- Stephanie!
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Title: im late as shit
Reviewed By: ShaylaBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story!!!!!!
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Title: Shame on you
Reviewed By: Yuchy story On: June 09, 2005 04:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pure and utter BLAH!
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Reviewed By: inux3kagome4ever On: June 09, 2005 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
....... I loved ur story but the whole " Inuyasha cheating on Kagome with Kikyo" thing was sick. I honestly hope u would never write anything with Kikyo and Inuyasha again, unless he hates her. Anyways keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Heaven'sAngel On: June 05, 2005 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved you stort!! Loved how you put the clothing labels and everything I actually understand. I read this story like 3 times get better each time I read it. like I said Loved that story.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: June 01, 2005 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a awesome story. I love the way you put everything together.
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Title: Hello!!!
Reviewed By: pimp'n chick On: April 29, 2005 19:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, Hey I havent read ur story yet but oh well im gonna read it i hope its gud cuz or else ill have to kill u... j/k if i killed u, u wuldnt b able to write or maybe u culd...Anyways! i wish u gud luck i dnt kno y but wtver hav fun writing other storys (i did not spell that properly) all 42 chaps in this story is in my scrapbook so i can read it at home YAY!!!! i read way toooooo MUCH!!!! omg there is 2hrs and 30 minutes left until gundam seed, inuyasha and .hack//sign i cant wait!!! YAY 4 Me AND YAY 4 U!!!!!!!!!!!! man im happy today! i luv canada but i hate where i live right now but i gottttta live with it so i die with cows, i hate the eastern townships dnt u i kno i do anyway im babbling about nothing important rigth now so ya... have fun writing and gud luck and anything else other ppl say, so ya Bye Bye Katty
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Title: I loved it
Reviewed By: DonnaTuskino [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. It was extremely intertaining for my extremely dull life. You've inspired me to write so right now I'm working on my first fic. Bethrothed. please r&r and tell me what you think. Ja
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Reviewed By: Ikiwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 21:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Hmm... I am sorry to critisize, but there are soo many spelling and grammar errors in this fic. I really think that you should read over ur chapters before you post them cuz there are wayy to many. The actual story line is pretty good, just the way you word things and make mistakes, spelling and just plain leaving words out, it all makes this story hard to read and really enjoy. This is only my opinion tho, and I get really picky, so don't take it personally! Many people obviously love ur story, so don't feel bad just cuz of what i said! Thanks! ~Ikiwi
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Title: Feh!! i'm gonna give this damm story a god dam 10
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope u write another real soon...
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Reviewed By: katie keita On: August 05, 2004 08:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is a realy good story, at first i didnt really like it but then when i've read all of it, it's quite a good story, i hope u'll keep it up best of luck 4 ur next fic
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 17, 2004 02:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey great story. I'm glad I taken the time out of life to read it it was worth it. I think it is a really cute story
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Reviewed By: Niffy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 15:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
whoops not the 200th but 120th ... same thing! :P
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