| "Crushed Petals" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 03:47 CDT
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please update soon
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Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 10:24 CST
Comment/Review:
You....must update!!! Common!!! I at least am redoing hearts of Roses!! You could update this!! please?
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed in) On: January 23, 2005 12:59 CST
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well, at least they know what the problem is. but the real question is, can they survuve it? hahaha. Okay, just ignore my insane ness
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed in) On: January 23, 2005 12:53 CST
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See! i told ya it was gonna be two demons who could do that kind of thing! i was so right! anyways, good chapter, and about time they found out! hmph!
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Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed in) On: January 23, 2005 12:44 CST
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Oops! the first review was for the prologue! hehehe Good chapter, even though it couldn't have been yusuke and kuwabara. they didn't even know! but i bet it was some demons that pretended to look like them! yeah, that'll work... i guess..
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Title: ch.1
Reviewed By: annemarieh(not signed in) On: January 23, 2005 12:34 CST
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Wow oh wow. I can't belive... poor keiko! it's a great start, that's for sure. i just gotta read more! see ya at the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2005 22:14 CST
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Two Yuuske's? Two Kuwabara's? ...when you said he was flying I started thinkin' of Jin... but then quickly stopped myself as Jin wouldn't do that sort of thing... and I know a Jin Fangirl... so, no one heard... me... type this... Hm... ah well. Not like she actually know's me... and is reading reviews... Heh. Poor Keiko! To have to suffer through that trauma... and to have two people that you trust seemingly do it as well! Ya know what? I think Kurama(even though he was probably very angry...) Would have noticed the things screaming shapeshifter... at least, once Keiko reacted like that, you would think he would piece it together that, as Yuuske and Kuwabara had reacted with surprise and panic, that they really hadn't done it... Though this is probably already in motion, I just don't know 'cause your the author...
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Title: Good story Please Update
Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the why this story is going please update update update. Please please please.
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Reviewed By: Sailor Tiamat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoyed reading your fic! And since I should be signed in...Please send me the URL to your group. =^^= Please update your story soon!
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Title: I love it!!
Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! HieiKeiko!!!!!! yayayayayayayayayayayay!!!!!!!! *hugs kurama plushie* Continue!!
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Yumiko Yoshihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really really REALLY awsome fic!!! I would like you to do a HieixKeiko. It is a pairing I have never seen befor and a challenging one. But you are such a good writer that I think you could do it. Besides.... I want kurama for me *puppy eyes* I know its bad... but... please??
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Reviewed By: Morro On: April 28, 2004 07:17 CDT
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It was only by chance that I found this one ^_^ I've become quiet curious as to what you are going to do! I would rather a Keiko/Hiei then Kurama since there are very few sucessful Hiei romances without some really twisted parings with the kitsune :P (why do people keep insisting they're gay???!!! gahhh!!!!!!!!) It will be a challenge to pull off a romance for Hiei= trying to put one together myself.... Please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiei lover 1706 On: March 27, 2004 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story! I am dying to know more! Please keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Tamlin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting! I think I would like to see Kurama and Keiko together, their temperments fit. Anywho, its great.
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Heavy stuff here!! Excellent as always so not gonna dwell on that too much, hee he. I vote for Kurama as I feel Keiko doesn't have what it would take to keep up with Hiei. Like Shizuru, hint hint!! Can't wait for more.
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