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Title: LOVE IT!!!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 06:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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BAM!!!THAT WAS AWSOME!I like Yams with Seto the same way i like Seto with Jou-kun!WRITE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Catchfire the original but somebody stole my name On: December 13, 2004 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!!! But you really need to go back and finish the lemon between Yami and Seto. It just left off too suddenly. So please go back and finish it. It should probably leave off with them collapsing into the bed and falling asleep. The ending was just great for a couple of sequels. And I really love the idea of Bakura and Yugi getting together. One story should probably pick up right there with Bakura dragging Yugi off somewhere to ravish him. I really like that pairing but I've only seen a couple of fics with them. Also I kind of think that Bakura would get along with Yugi better than Yami, because both Yami and Bakura are too dominating for each other. They'd always be fighting to see you got to be on top. But with Yugi/Bakura together Bakura would be the dominate (or seme) and Yugi would be the submissive (or uke). It would work great too if you threw in Ryou with them. Oooohh now that's a nice mental picture. Of course I still like Yami/Bakura pairings, it's just that I got this impression from your fic. Also what about Jou? Is Yami going to lead him somewhere where both Yami and Seto can ravish him and then become a permanent threesome? Oooohh I sure hope so. But please please don't leave lemons mostly but not quite finished. It's bad form. Not to mention that it's liable (definately) to get you mobbed (or would that be lynched) by rabid fans desperate for more. So keep up the great writing.
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Reviewed By: XxxInukuraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2004 10:18 CDT
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..i'm confused. By the edning...I thought Yami was with Kaiba...??? I dunno..guess i have to read the sequel! no problem with that.
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Reviewed By: Vapid B. On: August 01, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love 'Seduction of Ice.' It is one of the sexiest stories I've read. There were a few words that didn't belong. Like referring to one of the male characters as she instead of he. There have been a lot of 'Paired up,school project' fics. Though, you didn't really get much into that. You added your own little twist with the party and Jou's interest in Yami. Also Bakura's advance on Yugi. It has been awhile since you said there would be a sequel. I look forward to reading it and I hope you finish it soon. Please e-mail me at Obsessionanime@aol.com or Vapidfemale@aol.com when it's done or you start another Yuugi-oh fic. Great job and I wish you luck on your stories. -VB
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Title: Ooh!
Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 01:11 CDT
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Ah! Kick-ass fic!! Heh, heh. My, Kaiba's sooooo... Yeah... Heh. Ah!! I love this fic! I couldn't keep that sly grin off my face the whole time I was reading! And Bakura was so delicious! Ha! He fooled around with Yugi?! Oh, that's great! So basically, the pairing were Ryou/Bakura/Yugi? And I bet they're going to be Kaiba/Yami/Jounouchi right?! Ooh! How greatsome!! Oh, I almost forgot to mention though: on chapter four you wrote "Yami no Yugi" which translates to "Yugi of Yami" or "Yugi of Darkness." Did you possibly mean to say "Yugi no Yami" which translates to "Yami of Yugi" or "Darkness of Yugi" AKA Yami? Meh. Whatever, ne? Oh, but this is such an awesome fic!! I can't wait for the next two installments of your trilogy!! Please! Don't keep us waiting!!
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Reviewed By: RyokoMink [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 22:41 CDT
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Oh! I have been searching for a good fic for a long while and at last I've found it! Oh, please continue the fics! I thought it was hilarious when Bakura was making Seto jealous. Heh heh! He just wanted to get his hands on Yami. ^_^ I'll be waiting for the next ones!! Ja!
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Reviewed By: yoko-sama On: June 09, 2004 16:55 CDT
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::screams:: oh m' god ohmygawd! that was really very cool... hahahahehehe ::shudder:: i like the preview for the next fic ::screams again:: eee! malik!! how lovely!! ^^ hurry up and post it! great job with this one!! ^___^
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 07:55 CDT
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Very hot lemon! Is this lesding to a threesom? Can't wait for the next seduction to begin.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 15:01 CDT
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Yay, you finished! I love this chapter... and the lovely lucious lemon. (hehe, allitertion rocks. ^-^) Whoah...what's with Jou and Yami? Hmm, guess I'll have to wait. Now, get working on Seduction of Fire!
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Title: great fic
Reviewed By: 246iloveyami On: April 06, 2004 04:09 CDT
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i love your fic it has to be one of my favourites one. keep up the work and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina On: March 26, 2004 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Seto is imaptient isn't he good. Hope theres a lemon soon. I love this story. ok maybe i need to rethink the other pairing now possibably Ryou (or is ita bakura/ Yugi
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess (not logged in) On: March 24, 2004 19:36 CST
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Yes! Update! Hey, how soon can we expect the lemon? Hey, for the sequel,is one of the couples Bakura and or Ryou/Yugi? Anyway, great chapter as usual, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Casey K (lazy ;)) On: March 24, 2004 01:39 CST
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Good! Is the next chapter going to be a lemon, or just a lime and fade out? ANYWAYZ, please update soon! Oh, and can you check out some of my fics and tell me what you think? I'm not too sure on whether or not to write another chapter for Light and Dark or not...
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Reviewed By: yami's Lover(really Dragonrider00 a mediaminer member) On: March 23, 2004 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG very very good you must continue this story i loved it. I need more please. I love how kaibe gets all jelous and then just grabs yami like that^^ EEEEEEE please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Velvetina On: March 21, 2004 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm guessing J/M next maybe? that'd be unique please correct me soon if i'm wrong. Come on write mroe soon so we can see is Seto remembers to breathe
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