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| "Mocking Mary" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! ^^ Scream, Mary Sue, scream- MWA HA HA HA!
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 15:21 CST
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V. fun read. ^^ Sounds a lot like warrior sue, only much more gory. Sorry, I haven't seen kill bill either, so I can't tell you how much the character was in keeping with the story, but she sounds like an arabian ninjitsu or something. Lol... still no mary sue ideas, but please keep the chapters coming! ^^
| Reviewed By: Meiyaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Giggles* This is hilarious! Hamster Sue... reminds me of those 'spong monkeys'. But here's two! Ninniachmire Sue, blond hair, blue-silver-green eyes. She's blind (I'm not dissing on blind people, but this is way overdone!) and falls in a well (or is pushed by someone in the Fellowship) and drowns. The end. _____ Greenleaf, Legolas' twin sister the perfect little selfless little wench who can't fight goes on the quest with them and dies in Moria to protect little Frodo and hot Aragorn. The end. *Thinks* I like the first one the best, really. But please put these in? Please? MK: Hello, Mary. Long time no see. MS: Hi, Meiyaku! Good to see you too! I'm getting engaged to _____, the cute one over there! MK: What?! No way, wench! *Pushes Sue into lake outside of Moria* Bye-bye!
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 20:18 CST
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Posessed? Lol.... I taped the academy awards! LotR kicks butt! WOO HOO! Er- alright, I didn't need to say that, but who really cares- huzzah for the scorning of Mary Sue's! ^^
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 17:04 CST
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Heh heh heh- I looooved chapter six. ^^ So great fic, wonderful to see a fic dedicated to bashing the dreaded Mary Sue's! ^^ Sauron's daughter being a perfect example.... oh, elvish names, how about Elianethtulniel? Yeah it sucks... but it's long and complicated. ^^ Am I the first person on mm.org to review this? Just wondering.... anyhow, great fic, marvelous fic actually, adding it to my favorites, all right I'll shut up now. But one more thing- make the next girl get killed by- um- by..... aw heck I don't know. Just update soon.
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