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| "The Wild West and the Gang of Four Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Y On: April 02, 2004 19:10 CST
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Yo, just read the new chapter. I love the joke with the peppers, but I have a hard time believing that the boys wouldn't try to take some kind of revenge. I guess they just had better things to think about at the moment. Good luck on that tournament!
| Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 00:40 CST
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Hi again! I'm happy there's no Kikyo/Inuyasha romance. When ever there is, for some reason the author (even if they don't intend to) makes Kikyo really, really... (how should I phrase this?) frustrating. Yes. She is very frustrating. I mean, have you read some of those fics where Kikyo is either a total possesive bitch, some sex slave driver, or a psycho path who's bent on killing Kagome? *Sigh* Sorry that this is so off topic, but eventually one get's tired of it and wants to smack the author that has Kikyo cussing lke a sailor. (Really, has Kikyo ever cursed in the manga/anime?) OK, a lighter topic, I really enjoyed this chapter. I like how you made Sango sort of mischievious about the peppers and such. That was pretty funny. It looks like your reviews are becoming longer *holds fist high in air victoriously* There is hope for mediaminer's reviews!! Happiness! I hope you update as soon as possible, but don't rush it! Quality over quickness! ^^ Ja-
| Reviewed By: Y On: March 24, 2004 17:24 CST
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Nice, very nice. You're doing a great job at getting all the people in the story. I have a guess at why Kagome was so freaked out when she saw that spider but I'll keep that to myself. Thax for updating, I'm suprised that you did such a good job so fast! Remember, you don't ever have to rush no matter how much the reviewers push you. Let's not forget that it's your story. Go at your own pace(as long as you keep going!)
| Title: Hehe!!
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 09:56 CST
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Some one actually reviewed for more than two lines!! (Even if they're spread acrross different reviews, but it works doesn't it!!!) And they complimented me on everyone! I feel loved! And evil fuzzballs always work I tell you!!!! Also, it would be appreciated if you did not in fact call me "thorny". Aurora will do fine thank you. Anyway, thank you for listening to me (even if the copy and paste thing was a little "off") For listening to me: You get huggles chucked at you (do not fear the huggles, huggles are Aurora's and your friends) OK, sorry for I am without a mocha at 7:55 in the morning. I apologize and I also chuck huggles at FeFe who is a very, very good author. ^^
| Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice little fill in. Out of curiosity, will Kikyo be in this fic? Since you said that the miko family died out during that last massacre, I'm willing to bet that she's either dead, but plays a very important part in the story; she was one of the granddaughters of that patriarch that you said was the head of the miko family, and she survived through the last show down and she hears about how the Spider Gang is back and so she reassembles troups to support her when the entire quarrel between the three starts over again (because I have a gut feeling it will) Gee, all you need to do is throw Koga into there now and then all of Inuyasha's enemies would be all together in an all out war against themselves and the Inuyasha group. Hehe! Well, I might not even be right about this so I really shouldn't be typing it, but oh well. Also, I have one fial hunch (for this review at least) that since you said there were two grand daughters of the patriarch, I was thinking that Kagome was like Kikyo and survived the last show down. Either that or she was a past Spider Gang member and that was why she was looking at that Spider Gang member weirdly. Well, I'm just making up my own little side stories here so don't mind me!!! ^^ Any way, I'm happy that you updated this soon and I hope you do it again! ^-^
| Title: By the way
Reviewed By: INU ROX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the way, how long should the review b? Aurora (May I call you thorny? Yes...even though you aren't responding, I 'll have to answer for you, what a pity...) Alright time for my shot at an actually *intereseting* review... third take! It's good, great excellent, etc! WRITE MORE if not 'll use the copy and paste and become even more mindless and shallow than usual! Mwah ha ha ha ha!
| Title: Really
Reviewed By: INU ROX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just readin over ur reviews, and I have to say, evil fuzzballs just may work, but even better, why not have an evil computer trying to devour the story whole, and have you being the damsel in distress about to be run over by the train, if it isn't stopped by the reviews, which are extra padding. Notice, this goes along with the whole theme of Western. This is REALLY uncliche! I like it! I like it!
| Title: OMG! Western is so original!
Reviewed By: INU ROX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I know the title must sound like I'm a valley girl or something, but really, this whole Western theme was put into play surprisingly well. Don't get me wrong, I've seen some good work (Aurora_thorn is good, Riley Maxwell), but yours is up there with them. I mean, the whole theme, and the slow push of the plot is really great...WRITE MORE!- INU ROX ;)
| Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 22:56 CST
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Actually now that I look at the reviews, Inuobsessed was quite complimentery with his/her short review. I will keep that at an exception.
| Title: WHY!! Why Iask you!!!
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 22:55 CST
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*Twitch* *Twitch* What is up with these short reviews! Has mediaminer lost their complex thoughts about peoples fanfics?!! Have they no opinion?!! No feelings about the article they have recently read?!! UUUUUGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!! *Sob* This is frustrating. I said it once and I'll say it again, your fic deserves better... *Sniff*
| Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 22:51 CST
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First of all, I really did like that line. It even inspired me to write that "Are you kidding, rot his entire arm off!" joke that I made Rin say in my fanfic. I'm still not sure if you got any long reviews yet because I can only see the first seven, but I'll find out soon enough now won't I? Secondly, THANK YOU!!!! Flattery is always appreciated, especially when they announce it on their own fic! It makes me happy! ^^ I love your fic also. I think that this is the only western Inuyasha fanfiction I have ever seen. (And I've seen a lot of fanfics) I love it when people are terribly creative, it's one of the main things that I strive for in my fanfics (other than pairings, I can't stand Sess/Kag) Anyway, I hope that you update really soon and i hope that you have a lovely Spring break!! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Y On: March 10, 2004 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, I accsidentily sent the last one without finishing it*blush* heh heh well what I was going to say was that it's an uber-cool fic and that I cant wait for you to write more. Lookin' forward to more action, you're right the last one was a little on the slow side(but just a little)
| Reviewed By: Y On: March 10, 2004 21:43 CST
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uber-cool fic, ya just gotta write
| Reviewed By: Inu obsessed! On: March 09, 2004 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could give this story a higher rating I would!!! I never thought of the Inuyasha story like this before!!! All I've got to say is that this is BRILLIANT!!!!!!
| Title: -.- Is that all people have to say about this fic?
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 15:34 CST
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God, does all of your reviews only contain a "Great job update soon"? This is pathetic. Maybe I just get more complex reviews because I added an evil fuzz ball in my fic but still, you deserve a hell lot more than that!!! >
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