| "The Wild West and the Gang of Four Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked it, loved it, can't wait for more. I really enjoy the western theme. Can Kagome kick some ass now? hehehe.
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Reviewed By: Y On: April 26, 2004 19:29 CDT
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Oh *pause* My *pause* GOD!!!!!!! THAT was the best action sequence I have read in a loooooong time! You should seriously consider doing more of those! This chapter definitely exceeded(my) expectations! May the muse be with you
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Title: *Sweatdrops*
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 23:48 CDT
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Sorry for dumping all of my problems today on your review board!!!! Sorry!! ^_^;;;
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Title: THANK KAMI FOR FREQUENT UPDATES!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! It's nice that you kept to your word and updated so quickly. I like it when people update good fics on a frequent basis (which is rare). So, now I'm even more curious about Miroku's prank. We (the viewers) haven't seen the slightest clue to what it might be yet and from what you said, you leave me in never dying suspence. Anyway, I take it the "non-tribal" is Rin, correct? It would be nice to hear the story behind that one. Uhg.. I'm also so happy that you updated. No one is updating my favorite fics NOBODY and I checked out some of the newer fics and I nearly died from shock on how OOC all the characters are. I believe I even flamed one under an anonymis (I don't know how to spell that) name. I was also in a cranky mood today since I got sun burned after psycho dragged me to her house to sell (out of all the things in the world) lemonaide. This is sadly money that we're trying to collect to go to Japan. (We're so pathetic) And I ended up giving her my half (which was a surprising total of thirty something dollars judging from the product) to let us go inside. Then I was more content. Your fic, truly made my day better.
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Reviewed By: Y On: April 19, 2004 20:20 CDT
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P.S. Someone should dance. I don't know why, they just should. Possibly with one other? I dunno.. this was completely random :P
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Reviewed By: Y On: April 19, 2004 20:16 CDT
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*groan* You made him SING. How degrading can you get. Oh well, it was really really funny and in the end, isn't that what really matters? The compassionate answer would be no, but whatever :P 4-3-1 I hope that means you did good! I really couldn't tell you... May the muse be with you
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 11:20 CDT
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YEAY!!! my hunny sesshomaru makes an apperance, I can just picture him in indian clothing (nothing but a loin cloth) and that bare chest :::starts to drool::: . Please update soon. Oh! and no problem, I like reveiwing to good fics :)
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again! I'm intrested to see how Miroku will plot his revenge. For you to bother to keep it a secret means that the prank and the reaction of the prank should be good. I also can't wait to see how Kagome's reaction will be to her lovely shampoo. Then agin I can't imagine Kagome taking that lightly with Inuyasha once it does happen. It should be enjoyable... Anyway, great chap. Evil cliffy, but it keeps readers hooked so great job. Out of curiosity, is Rin going ot be in this fic and if so, will she be older or still a child? I'm looking foward to your next update (Sunday probably, correct?) One last thing, I think it's good to have a friend in fanfiction too. ^^
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 22:00 CDT
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Lol, I love the story. It's a great story live and a break from the original plot. i love the creativity and the fact that the charictars aren't ooc in a completly different setting. All in all this is comming out to be a great fic. Hope you update soon!! *cindy*
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Reviewed By: Y On: April 02, 2004 19:10 CST
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Yo, just read the new chapter. I love the joke with the peppers, but I have a hard time believing that the boys wouldn't try to take some kind of revenge. I guess they just had better things to think about at the moment. Good luck on that tournament!
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 00:40 CST
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Hi again! I'm happy there's no Kikyo/Inuyasha romance. When ever there is, for some reason the author (even if they don't intend to) makes Kikyo really, really... (how should I phrase this?) frustrating. Yes. She is very frustrating. I mean, have you read some of those fics where Kikyo is either a total possesive bitch, some sex slave driver, or a psycho path who's bent on killing Kagome? *Sigh* Sorry that this is so off topic, but eventually one get's tired of it and wants to smack the author that has Kikyo cussing lke a sailor. (Really, has Kikyo ever cursed in the manga/anime?) OK, a lighter topic, I really enjoyed this chapter. I like how you made Sango sort of mischievious about the peppers and such. That was pretty funny. It looks like your reviews are becoming longer *holds fist high in air victoriously* There is hope for mediaminer's reviews!! Happiness! I hope you update as soon as possible, but don't rush it! Quality over quickness! ^^ Ja-
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Reviewed By: Y On: March 24, 2004 17:24 CST
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Nice, very nice. You're doing a great job at getting all the people in the story. I have a guess at why Kagome was so freaked out when she saw that spider but I'll keep that to myself. Thax for updating, I'm suprised that you did such a good job so fast! Remember, you don't ever have to rush no matter how much the reviewers push you. Let's not forget that it's your story. Go at your own pace(as long as you keep going!)
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Title: Hehe!!
Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 09:56 CST
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Some one actually reviewed for more than two lines!! (Even if they're spread acrross different reviews, but it works doesn't it!!!) And they complimented me on everyone! I feel loved! And evil fuzzballs always work I tell you!!!! Also, it would be appreciated if you did not in fact call me "thorny". Aurora will do fine thank you. Anyway, thank you for listening to me (even if the copy and paste thing was a little "off") For listening to me: You get huggles chucked at you (do not fear the huggles, huggles are Aurora's and your friends) OK, sorry for I am without a mocha at 7:55 in the morning. I apologize and I also chuck huggles at FeFe who is a very, very good author. ^^
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Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a nice little fill in. Out of curiosity, will Kikyo be in this fic? Since you said that the miko family died out during that last massacre, I'm willing to bet that she's either dead, but plays a very important part in the story; she was one of the granddaughters of that patriarch that you said was the head of the miko family, and she survived through the last show down and she hears about how the Spider Gang is back and so she reassembles troups to support her when the entire quarrel between the three starts over again (because I have a gut feeling it will) Gee, all you need to do is throw Koga into there now and then all of Inuyasha's enemies would be all together in an all out war against themselves and the Inuyasha group. Hehe! Well, I might not even be right about this so I really shouldn't be typing it, but oh well. Also, I have one fial hunch (for this review at least) that since you said there were two grand daughters of the patriarch, I was thinking that Kagome was like Kikyo and survived the last show down. Either that or she was a past Spider Gang member and that was why she was looking at that Spider Gang member weirdly. Well, I'm just making up my own little side stories here so don't mind me!!! ^^ Any way, I'm happy that you updated this soon and I hope you do it again! ^-^
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Title: By the way
Reviewed By: INU ROX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the way, how long should the review b? Aurora (May I call you thorny? Yes...even though you aren't responding, I 'll have to answer for you, what a pity...) Alright time for my shot at an actually *intereseting* review... third take! It's good, great excellent, etc! WRITE MORE if not 'll use the copy and paste and become even more mindless and shallow than usual! Mwah ha ha ha ha!
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