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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 14, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter and would like to write a longer review to tell you how great this story is..But I can't because I have to go lie down with my daughter .. She is not feeling well,so I'll just say please update again soon. Oh my daughter Jillian who is 16teen said she likes your story to..or also...I red your story to her to help her feel better..
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 03:52 CDT
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Condo does have a swimming hole. Cool!^^
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You wrote more!!. Aready! You're a legend! Except that I have this sinking feeling that we're getting horribly close to the end, and I don't want this to end. I love it too much. Please don't finish yet. Did I say that you were a legend? Legend. Absolutely.^^
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: June 13, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic stands out from the other stories currently being posted in GW fandom. I like your description of the story's setting, the people and that even though Heero has run from his problems, whatever they are, that no one is truly free of them. The plot has yet to be revealed, but I'm hoping to learn more about why Heero ran, of Duo's problems and how things are going to play out in their newly-formed relationship. I'm eagerly looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Still wonderful! I love it.^_^
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Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: June 06, 2004 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I found myself smiling hugely during many parts of chapter 7. I really liked chapter 7. Okay, I *loved* chapter 7 and I can't get enough of it and I am twitchy with anticipation for chapter 8!
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 21:22 CDT
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It was great to see a new chapter! I like how Heero feels his friendship with Trowa and Wufei growing. He's certainly perceptive about Quatre and Trowa! Poor guy's going to give himself an ulcer mulling over Duo though. At least he's finally letting himself act a bit spontaneous. I wonder what they'll encounter at Ootha? I hope he'll help Duo understand he doesn't need to remain in that kind of environment.
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Just wonderful. Thanks heaps.^^
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Title: ch6
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's good!! Thanks heaps for the update; I love the way that this is going. Imagery and dialogue are spot-on (and if you ever want to update Viva I will be ecstatically ecstatic also, but I know; you have a life...sigh.)Thanks again.^^
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: April 26, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice! I am glad I have you on my MM favorites list, because I would have hated to miss this chapter! The description of the scenery, the quiet feeling of unrest, the poetic language and imagery ... very nice. I am looking forward to chapter 6.
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesomely good!! Thanks for the update. Do you need to add a footnote for santa claus/thistledown? Can't wait for the next bit.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Ya know, sometimes you just have to get away to gather your thoughts together. You have my curiosity piqued - WTF is Heero running from? I think you've done a wonderful job of showing Duo's ability to hide his true self behind the boisterous, happy-go-lucky guy he wants others to see. I like his ability to read Heero so well; his little observation to Heero was perfect. Thanks for updating!
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Title: KathB
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Lethanon, I am really, really enjoying this and not just 'cause I'm from Lithgow. Great characterisation; Duo has a really nice blend of brashness and vulnerability, and a nice piece of dinky-di Oztraliana - it really feels like the bush. ("really nice" seems to be my phrase of choice for this fic). The idiom is perfect. The lamb is hilarious and I hope that he manages to stay off the baa-rby (groan). Does Condo have a swimming hole? I think that it needs one. Great work. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 23:39 CDT
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Well, I'm not following some of the words, but this is an entertaining fic so far regardless. I remember (wayyy back then) in high school having a couple of teachers that everyone wanted to hang around with after school. We'd even end up at their houses on the weekends, just like in your fic. When I attended my class reunion, a bunch of us still went visiting them! Of course, I suspect your fic is going to take a different turn, ne? Loved Heero's lamb!!! ; )
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 06, 2004 13:49 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story is the best thank you for updating .. Please update again sooon...^_~
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