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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 08, 2004 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good, emotionally. it made me cry. that's so sweet, and sad too.oh It's so lovely. I thikn it's beautiful..This is really good. I mean *really.* I could never write like this, with so much feeling. Great job! OH! I love this story Simply adored this chapter, Two thumbs WAYWAY up! *wink*
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 23:29 CDT
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I've enjoyed this fic, even when I had trouble with the dialect! I had a little difficulty with the last chapter, because it felt a bit rushed, but again - that might have just been because of my problems following some of the dialect. I love the way you write so vividly. It makes it so easy to imagine exactly what's going on in the fic. Of course, the last few chapters, my vivid imagination was getting a bit ill with all of the dead animals floating by, but that's what happens with a flood... Thanks for sharing this fascinating fic with us; I can't wait to see what you spring on us next!
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: July 08, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed this story very much. Your writing is excellent and unique in this fandom. While I feel I've missed a few details outlining the reasons behind some of the characters' actions, probably due to reading chapters over months and forgetting, I found the story to be well worth reading.
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Title: long comment so bare with me (#_#)
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow... the las tchap I read was 11 here are the comments- No no this can't be! I was dreading something the moment Duo and Heero split up to go home. Why would Duo run out into the storm like that?! I know the inferred answer but he has Heero now! Heero practically said he wasn't ever leaving him. Prehaps he thinks that he can recover Helen from the Bunyips or worse, the very reason that I practically bellowed 'why'... he wished the bunyip would take him too... Although Heero seems to be in perfect soldier mode *snickers at heero's earlier embarrassment at being seen in 'morning mode'* It has to be taxing for him...man he's gottabe pretty banged up. Now that I've read the entire thing...wow, worth repeating ya? the bunyip was helen, but maybe helen was never alive in the first place. she was always a bunyip but had to part from duo because the town was dying?! I was suprised that heero didn't meet with Duo either under the evergreen or seen him on their way back, all the g-boys present except for Duo hmm. I'm so said about Marie, and i still hold a certain amount of dislike toward Zechs and his behavior toward Heero... very disrespectful. Although he said he was sorry, I wouldn't think it was truly worth anything but it did give Heero a further sense of closure. I'm still stunned that it's over...the story ya know but a story is never truly over once its read, it lives on and the characters live out their lives in the hearts and minds of the readers and the writer. (^_^)
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Title: Ch 14 Epilogue
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you! It's been a wonderful, wonderful journey and I'm so glad that we all made it home safe and sound. Thank you for sticking with it.^^
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Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: July 04, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you! Thank goodness. Even though I used the wrong chapter numbers, you knew what I was asking for.
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Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: July 04, 2004 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Numb. I just finished reading Chapter 11. To be precise, I got up at 8 in the morning because I knew it was there, waiting for me. I curled up against the cold and hunched over the keyboard, too close to the screen. And read, and read, and couldn't stop even though I dreaded reaching the end. PLEASE post chapter 12 soon!
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Title: Ch 12
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 08:29 CDT
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Oh no...
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Title: Ch 10 and 11
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"..." I didn't review ch 10 to start with because I was too traumatised. I was still trying to think what to write, and now, a day later, ch 11 is here and I'm even more traumatised. Powerful stuff. Still a wonderful fic, still love it, still desperately want more, but...please don't drown Duo. Please?
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Reviewed By: priscel- dang! On: June 24, 2004 13:16 CDT
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Man what a ending for chap 10!... I'm speechless and excited to read the next chappy.
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Reviewed By: ardicana@msn.com (holly) On: June 23, 2004 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow. id never have guessed a storm could do that much damage. what an amazing story. you must continue soon. this is just fantastic. i LOVE this story. your characters are the best. so well developed. and the story! wow. just... please update soon. im not rushing you... but this is amazing. wonderful job.
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Title: Chapters 8 - 10
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 20:48 CDT
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OK - that woman was super creepy. Other than that though, I loved the time Heero and Duo had in Ootha. The 'thousand lifetimes and sunsets' both gave me goosebumps. *Sigh* I loved the extra effort Heero gave to teach fractions to his students. That's dedication! The weeping willow tree reminded me of a very similar place from my childhood. Too bad those guys weren't around... : ( I'm thrilled to see their PDA's. Poor Sandstone! It's the first thing I thought of at the beginning of Chapter 10; then I thought back and started worrying about Heero's feelings at the end of Chapter 9. The storm was terribly frightening. 'Blood Rain' sounds like a perfect description. You wrote so vividly I could practically picture it all. I almost hurled at the images of what they went through (and over) as they drove the Ute toward Quatre. And then the horror of what they encountered when they finally found him - my shoulders are all in knots now. This must be an extremely traumatic time for Quatre. I hope that Trowa and Heero will be in time. I missed Duo in this chapter, and hope he's hiding under a solid table, safe and dry...
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: June 22, 2004 10:15 CDT
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Oh my goodness, that was so intense. Quatre seems in a pretty dire situation. Hopefully he can be saved. Great description of the storm and their sense of panic as events unfolded. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 14, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter and would like to write a longer review to tell you how great this story is..But I can't because I have to go lie down with my daughter .. She is not feeling well,so I'll just say please update again soon. Oh my daughter Jillian who is 16teen said she likes your story to..or also...I red your story to her to help her feel better..
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 03:52 CDT
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Condo does have a swimming hole. Cool!^^
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