"When the Heart is Gone" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: alp1230michelle On: December 23, 2005 20:32 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I cried at the end. It was amazing. Very good, ten out of ten.
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Title: cute Reviewed By: kirsda On: January 19, 2005 05:32 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ahh poor tori! **cries** man that guy just get shity deals dont he
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Title: WAHHHHHHH! .::ToT::. Reviewed By: Frankie Crow On: August 25, 2004 15:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Such a beautiful fanfic and yet-- It's SO SAD ::sobs and cries out...:: AWWW Kami, WHY?! Tohru deserved to live. I can almost blame Hatori for being so dog-like when he wanted her to explode from her orgasms... tsk tsk. BUT WHY, KAMI SAMA???!!! ::SOBS FURIOUSLY::
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: July 20, 2004 15:57 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: brillant story- so sad though and so very different from other stories
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Reviewed By: toffee On: June 16, 2004 05:05 CDT Comment/Review: it's soo sad! i cryed i laughed (i am being a dork rightnow soo sorry!) i am happy oooo very nice story!!! ;_
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Title: Yay Akiyo Died!!..... Reviewed By: Yuki&Toru4ever On: May 16, 2004 08:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Yay Akito Died!!!!Yay!!! Booo Toru/Hatori paring. sory didnt mean to sound rude. anyway i have a question how come hatori didnt *poof* during...um... you know.. but he did in the next chapter? just asking. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Arctic_fox999, who is currently too lazy to sign in. On: March 16, 2004 00:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWESOME!! AWESOME!! THAT... WAS... GREAT!! AND YET IS WAS SO... FRICKIN'... SAD!!! T_T I almost cried! That was a masterpiece. Bravo.
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Reviewed By: SaVaY [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 19:35 CST Comment/Review: SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! man, i'm so risking grounding by being on the computer. oh well. anyways, that's like the only hatori/tohru fic i've actually enjoyed. *sighs sadly* never thought i would feel sorry for tohru, but i really do wish she didn't die. i mean, i really don't hate her too much...long story. anyways, you're a great author!!! don't stop writing!!!
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