| "This Is The Father I Always Wanted?" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: 123321123321 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 19:26 CDT
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this is great up date soon
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Reviewed By: DigiGoggleBoy (can't log on--evil mm.org) On: April 06, 2004 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. I like plot twists, hehe... I like fanfic writers that are "evil". Frequent problems with using the wrong word (so-called "effect/affect"-type mistakes), but they are not too distracting. I sincerely hope that you don't make poor Kagome's life any worse (angst is one thing, but really-sad-pulled-out-torture is another).
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Reviewed By: Kinako (not logged in cause Hotmail won't let me. >_ On: April 06, 2004 14:59 CDT
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*hides from the Kikyo-haters* SCCCCCAAAARRRRRYYYYY! Anyway, this fic is getting interesting, though I'm kinda glad to know it won't be Sesshomaru/Kagome. I like Sesshomaru, but him and Kagome just don't strike me as a possible couple. Anyway, keep up the good work. :)
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Reviewed By: review On: April 06, 2004 14:33 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Gittelbug [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soo good. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: yuppy! On: April 05, 2004 20:22 CDT
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u updated u updated yeah thats fantastic but u beter update soon yor keeping me on pins and needles!
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Reviewed By: Inu Bitch On: April 05, 2004 20:18 CDT
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just shut up and update
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Title: too tired to log in... but I'm Kagome14
Reviewed By: kag14 On: April 05, 2004 12:12 CDT
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AAAH! *runs and hides* It was Sesshy???? Damn that Kikyo! My (excuse me, I mean Kagome's) life is a living hell now! GRRR!!!!
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Title: Removing from favorites
Reviewed By: vorahk829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 09:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Remember when I said that this story was going on my favorites? Well, now I'm taking it off because you made Inuyasha betray Kagome.
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Reviewed By: hmmm.... On: April 04, 2004 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this story is interesting.its quite angusty. I can't beleive u did all those thngs to Kagome. by now i wud of just given up on life if i were her. well i wonder wats gonna happen between kag and inu. jhow can inu kiss kik thats just disguisting. this just makes me very irritaited. u r a very cruel author. how will kag and inu opatch things up since it is a kag/inu ficy they must end up together in the end right? c to it that u update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: review On: March 28, 2004 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a feeling that the person is sessho am i right am tell me plz!
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Reviewed By: vorahk829 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 15:36 CST
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Just a response to someone who had called 12blue12 a theif...and you know who you are...if you'd look at the summary, you'd notice that 12blue12 did acknowledge that she was inspired by 'Father Figure' to write this. She did NOT try to deny it, so she is NOT a theif. You also then proceeded to tell Rozefire that 'Father Figure' was plagiarized, which is not true. I really think that 12blue12 deserves an apology for that.
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Reviewed By: nice story On: March 26, 2004 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice story i love the story plot but u better have kento kiled by the end of the story or beware!
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 25, 2004 19:19 CST
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YOUR FIC WAS MEGA GOOD!!
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 25, 2004 19:17 CST
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*everyone related to me and is a big fan of inu/kag pairings(which is a whole bunch)got dragged into forming a mob everywhere by me and starts to kill "the hoe"(KIKYO)and Kento in some way**WHEN THE DEED WAS DONE EVERYONE STARTED TO WORK ON PICKET-SIGNS*when everyone finished the picket sign they started to walk around 12BLUE12 with me leading saying"NO INUYASHA AND KAGOME PAIRINGS,NO PEACE~NO INUYASHA AND KAGOME PAIRINGS NO PEACE"over and over again*KENTO AND KIKYO*gags*SHOULD BOTH DIE TOGETHER!!!WHAT HAPPENED TO GOD'S HEAD WHEN HE "CREATED" KENTO AND MRS.BITCH-A-LOT,KIKYO!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!*starts doing the puppy dog pout**pouts*PWEASE UPDATE SOON 4 AMANDA!!
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