| "The Last Thing I Expected" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiten luver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this could turn out to be a good story. I was sad not to find another chappy. Ooo I wonder what naughty Hiten is up to.
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update, its a lovely story, but a little strange that hiten would like kagome, i saw that woman he was with befor, and kagome was still pretty young? But its your story, and only my opinion.
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Original pair. So, where's the next chapter?
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