| "Marriage Case" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c@aol.com On: October 29, 2004 21:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it plzzzzz update soon plzzzzz!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good chapter but the grammar needs a little work, I tend to do the same thing myself. You seemed a little more shy about this chapter then all the others. I think that if you relax everything will come out just right. But I do enjoy work and please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Heart of Warrior [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 00:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sooooo cute!
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Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks also! I read what you have of it on FF.net and this is really good stuff. Love and Peace! Sasuke:)
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Reviewed By: SKF13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
CUTE! I can just imagine trying to get Misao into a dress. I hate the darn things too!
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