| "Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Witch On: August 28, 2005 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved your story . . . very intense and what not . . . you should continue with making stories . . . PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Title: Rain
Reviewed By: ounxmony On: August 27, 2005 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic! I love Kaname and Sousuke in this fic!
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Reviewed By: Weltall Elite On: April 02, 2005 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a good read. I suppose I find Sousuke's actions a little too forward to completely buy, but I respect that you made the effort to rationalize them and that you didn't take it too far. So you maintained a good balance of the fluff with the hesitation between them. I liked it.
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Title: mysteriouso
Reviewed By: kagayaku rei tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
hilarydufda2nd doesn't know what she's talking about..... wither that or she's a big PERVERT!! i have to agree with the other people, it is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! i hope you find this inspiring and decide to write more like this! i know that we.... meaning everyone with a good heart, will love them!^^ sincerly, mysteriouso
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Reviewed By: Jellybob 15 On: June 19, 2004 22:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
We do need more Full Metal Panic stories! I really think it's an awesome/funny series. I'll probably start writing one after I finish the third manga book. Anyway, this was a great one-shot! I fully enjoyed it. Hooray for rainy days! LOL, keep writing! Jelly
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a cute one-shot. Yeah it was a bit hard and sad at the begining and then it turned sweet and loving. Great way to go. Good job.
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Title: animePoPcorn
Reviewed By: animepopcorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i loved it! there are no good and cute fanfics! exapt for yours though! god i loved it! write more! write lots more! PLEASE! ^_^ i really do like it. your style is good... like how you make something obvious but u don't actually state it in there! love it!
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Title: Awesome! Come on People! Review!
Reviewed By: pin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is an excellent story! I love it! Please continue writing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 18, 2004 18:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think the word here is beautiful, that was absolutely beautiful. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: hilarydufda2nd On: April 11, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic sucks!
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Reviewed By: blue_14 On: March 14, 2004 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww.... that was really sweet ;p you're right, it sucks that there's not enough FMP fics around.... hopefully you'll start the trend ;p i do hope you'll write more!
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Reviewed By: Nanie On: March 06, 2004 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, first of all, this was really well written. But what caught my attention the most was that you said you'd write others FMP if we reviewed... I SO WANT ANOTHER!!!!! this was sooo nice, and fluffy!!! I loved it. Sousuke and Kaname were mostly in character and I thank you for that. So please *puppy eyes* would you be nice enough to write another Full metal fanfic soon????
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sweet story! Totally enjoyable, and yes, more fanfics should be written about this show.
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