| "A Vow of Obligation" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Dejavotion On: December 05, 2004 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
woo that was great! You succeded in keeping them mostly in character, spelling could use some work though. Other whise overall great fic!
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Title: Cool!!!
Reviewed By: radical_edward02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooooooo much fun! It is nice to see someone write an Alucard X Intagral fic where he turns her and it is not sappy or OOC. I thought you did well in keepimg them in character and I highly enjoyed it. I would love to read a follow up where they go back and see what happens from there. ^_^ Awsome job.
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Reviewed By: Redmage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a damn shame that you haven't gotten many other reviews, because this is an excellent fic. You definitely did an admirable job of keeping both Alucard and Integra in character, and the situation definitely was an interesting one. Very, very good job.
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Title: Eh? What?
Reviewed By: Wermy On: September 07, 2004 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow...that was well written. It flowed very nicely and I liked it very much! I didn't find either OOC, actually. When caught in a situation like that, you'd respond...well, humanly. And seeing as one is human.... More? ^^
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Title: what i thought
Reviewed By: The Jackal On: March 04, 2004 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um I think that you convey your ideas well and the story is actually quite origanal. I could never pictureing integra getting married, but it does give a good prelude to alucards actions. Getting her when she is at her weekest. i hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: /Strega On: February 29, 2004 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
It wasn't confusing. I thought the end was brillant. Most would go with the full out obvious kissy-kiss scene but the gsture/word/gesture was very original. And I think you wrote both Alucard and interga well. I think it was cute he sulked! :)
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