| "Falling" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: It's not finished?
Reviewed By: Jhoy On: June 30, 2008 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi ya, I printed out this story to take with me to work to take up time between phone calls and such, and I was surprised that I printed an incomplete story. I like how it's going and I would really like to see how this works out. Do I have to join to find out when it get's updated?
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Reviewed By: wolfsister On: March 21, 2007 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story please update soon.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
good story. i cant wait 2 read how ur gonna do the lemon scene. update really soon plz.
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Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I love this fic. It's so sad, and I feel so bad for Inuyasha! I hope that Kouga can make him happy ;) Keep up the great work and I look forward to a new chapter! xox Anubis!
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Title: falling
Reviewed By: scorcha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a wonderful story. for the next part you should bring the kids to the den then when inuyasha has healed tell the kids they are going out to spar and have the yaoi scene there. the shoulod start to spar but koga should lay some moves on inuyasha. inuyasha is suprised but quickly gives into the sensation.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 23:02 CST
Comment/Review:
bleh!!! this is so sad! *cries* Kagome's gone...whats gunna happen to inu and Kag's kids? update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinna On: March 26, 2004 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really interesting fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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Reviewed By: Wind Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Good Story. Cute. Very cute. BUT I WANT TO KNOW MORE! KEEP GOING!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: March 10, 2004 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u got an interesting story, but what happened to kag?! update soon
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 11:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww... what happened to Kag? *tear* Nice Fic, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: March 01, 2004 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter until I saw that you were making this a yaoi story. I'm sorry but I don't read those kind of stories and I must of misunderstood the story line at the beginning. I will continue to enjoy reading your other works. It's not that I mind that type of relationship for someone else, but I don't like to read about it. Great job on the chapter in general. jschu25
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Title: Lalafapo
Reviewed By: Desde On: March 01, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovvvvveeee this....o_o Why did I put a 9? ...huh.
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Reviewed By: Mousy (logged off) On: March 01, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not bad, I hope you find your muse soon, becuase I really enjoy read this story. I would also like to know why Inyasha and his family is on the run and what happen to Kagome. I hope you update soon. And remember: muse don't sit on writer's block the sit in the most unlikely place, be it a flower or a dream. Until next time, bye.
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Title: chapter 1
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 28, 2004 10:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi, I like the first chapter so far and am interested to found out what happened to Kagome. And how Kouga of all people is going to help Inuyasha. jschu25
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Reviewed By: Tiger_gurl On: February 28, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this is sad. Good story though. I can't wait to read more.
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