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| "Final Fantasy VII: A new Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Nice fic,but for a Prologue it`s HUGE.Anyways,you have quite a few spelling errors but besides that i love your fic.I hope you update soon because It`s been awhile since you touched your story.Please update.Also this is a PG stoty and i saw two F words already.Dude,so what FF7 did and block out swears worse than Shit.Later!
| Title: Do you need a little help?
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi, my name is Amy! Your story is not that bad but it could just use some minor adjustments. Maybe you could add a few more details here and there. Also, you don't have to keep saying "said" after every character speaks. If want to improve your stories, you could go to the forums under Beta readers for help or you could e-mail me at Amyanderson45@hotmail.com. I'd be more than willingly to help you out, of course, that's if you want me to. Anyway, I think the true problem is that you just need some practice. Well, best wishes to you and good luck on your stories!
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