| "Unwilling Sleep" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 20:32 CDT
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OMG. I hope you write more. I will read any fic you write for any fandom, and if you need a beta-reader, just let me know. I've recommended this fic to every fanfic reader I know. You scenes between D and Leon are absolutely breathtaking. The emotional depth you capture with just a few words is astounding. I've read it through twice in 4 days. And each time - shivers. I don't go all fan-girly over things, but I tingled when I read this. This just does not happen. This was truly masterful. My only critique is that I thought a descriptive sentence before Leon's confession of love - something to misdirect - would have helped. It felt a little abrupt - which I'm thinking you were going for since that's how it would have felt to D. But for the reader, I'd have liked just one sentence more. It could be just me. OH! And let's not forget how you change the tone depending on whose viewpoint the story was toward, even though it was 3rd person - just brilliant! Please feel free to email me if you ever write more and want someone to read it.
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Reviewed By: Caliena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally I am finsihed with your work and all I can say is: Great! Absolute stunning and impressing. I like your style and the idea behind this story. Hope to read more by you. Byeby(e) Caliena
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 22:21 CDT
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as of this moment (I can't claim forever sorry) this is my favourite pertshop of horrors fic, I love the alternate ending you give..two thumbs way up on a job well done. I think you kept everyone in character and kept it interesting from beginning to end
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Reviewed By: Nue_Ehr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant. It was so detailed and well thought-through. I applaud you!
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Title: Amazing.
Reviewed By: Nue_Ehr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The most well written, well thought out, longest fanfiction ever. *Claps* A real new favorite of mine! I spent hours reading this! And I loved every single moment. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: the shadow lover On: February 27, 2005 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, this was absolutely WONDERFUL. best Petshop fic I've ever read. ^.^ it was GORGEOUS. and the scenes between Leon and D... heh. their first kiss had my face burning and turning bright red, which I haven't had happen since I was, like, ten. and they're first sex scene...absolutely gorgeous. this is wonderful, amazing, fantastic, incredible...and I don't use the word incredible often. ^.^ I am in LOVE with this story. I've read thousands of fics from more fandoms than I can think of, but this is one of the best fanfictions I have EVER read. heh. gods, I'm a suck-up, ne? but I'm being absolutely serious. I simply could not bear to leave the computer while reading this story, even for sleep or food. I would demand more, simply because I loved it so dearly, but...it's finished. completely, totally finished. and wonderfully. there is absolutely nothing lacking in this fic except, maybe, more greatly detailed raunchy sex scenes. ^.^ heh. but seriously, can you blame me? anyhoo. gods, they're first kiss was incredible...I just can't get over it! but the idea of D being a human being, aging like we do...stunned me. took my breath away. I was completely NOT expecting it. I can't picture him as a human...I can only imagine having to go to the bathroom for the first time in 1000 years... >.< gross. and his comment about feeling his body dying around him...reminded me of the last unicorn. ^^ which just shows how wonderful this is. I simply LOVE this fic. it's awes |
Reviewed By: obsydia On: February 11, 2005 05:45 CST
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i'm not sure if the ratings were 1=best or 10=best, so i didn't rate...but i really loved this story.i was hoping for little bit more about o-chan an the younger d, but i'm still extremely pleased with the way the story ended. i love your word choice and your style, especially how you kept everyone in character. i really really love your story. thank god for good PoH fanfics~ wonderful, lovely, beautiful PoH fanfics~ XD
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an amazing piece of work this is! It's absolutely the perfect continuation of D and Leon's story! This is definitely one of the best fics I've ever read. I hope you write more fics about this couple, because you can really get into their head and write them well!
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Reviewed By: o-chan On: December 05, 2004 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost never review fics, but i think this was really nice, made me cry in some parts, at the end too, cause its so sweet and soft...this is one of the best Petshop fics i ever read. U should be very proud of your skills, and i hope u write LOTS of other stories. And I hope D and Leon life together and happy for years and years! ^___^ *huggles* and thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of art!
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Reviewed By: Ragna01 who forgot her password On: November 19, 2004 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was one of the betters fic I've ever read! You're a very talented person! I'll be waiting for some more of your work!
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Reviewed By: Tiggy Malvern [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's fantastic to find there actually are some people consistently producing decent fic for Pet Shop of Horrors - all two of you so far! *g* This fic is well paced, well thought out and well developed, with original characters who actually seem like real people and not like plot devices. You develop the relationship plausibly, dealing with the problems and not veering into sap or fairy tale perfection. The whole thing was a good, solid, fun read. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Matahari On: August 25, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so good!! Why did it have to end? Oh man, I hope you make a sequel with Chris and the New D or something..It's too perfect!
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Reviewed By: bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! But PLEASE! You have to write another one! Perhapse about Chris and New D?
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Kagedtiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 18:09 CDT
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I'd love to read any other Petshop stories you might like to write. Especially ones in the same universe as this one.
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Title: AWWWWWWW!
Reviewed By: Kagedtiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOD! ^_^ I love you! I love you so much! ::sniffs:: I'm sad that it's over! But the ending was so cute! I loved it! ...But I'm still sad. ;_; Ah well. I'll just have to come over and read this again and again and again. ::nodnod:: And the ending truly was adorable. I could have asked for a bit more D/Leon fluff I suppose, but then again, I suppose it wouldn't have really fit. But this was brilliant! Well done! Bravo! Wonderful!
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