| "Unwilling Sleep" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: melaniehibiki @ yahoo . de Greetings from Germany ^_^ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 11:43 CDT
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Stupid mm.org won't let me stay logged in long enough to write a non-anonymous review ... oh well. This is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read, and at the end I almost started crying (only a supreme effort of will kept me from it ^_^). I can't believe it's over *sniffles* Can't you at least start another PSoH one, or continue 'Decision'? Hell, I'd even read fanfics from any other fandoms as long as it was you who wrote them ^_~
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Title: Kagedtiger
Reviewed By: Kagedtiger [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Please keep going on this. I check every day to see if it's been updated. I believe you said you had one more chapter left? (;_; So sad it's ending.) Please please PLEASE update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is one of my favorite fanfics *ever*!
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Reviewed By: Sachifie On: August 01, 2004 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a wonderful fanfiction. I was very amused when i read it and i can't wait for you to update. I love your creativity. Everything is acceptable and well explained. I love this story-I don't think everyone could pull off a plot like this but you. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Mizuki Ishida [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adored this story! It's rather hard to find truly well-written fics for PSoH and this one didn't disappoint at all. I haven't read anything past volume seven of the manga, so it will be interesting to see the comaprison between the things mentioned here and what happens in the later volumes. I rather liked the character Chuck, he was very interesting and the way he interacted with Leon was very nice. I hope I can find more stories out there as good as this.
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Reviewed By: Otakufanatic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God it's been a long time since I read a damn good fanfic. I bow in awe at the mastery you have brought this fanfic to life. I have the series of the pet shop of horrors. I must say you do justice to it. I always wondered if D really love the detective.Please write another chapter soon I wait with antisipation for the next chapter.
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Title: Must write more
Reviewed By: aikyo On: July 16, 2004 23:42 CDT
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I can't wait for more of this story! write more soon please :)
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Reviewed By: ^_^ mel ^_^ On: July 10, 2004 19:41 CDT
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Wow, this fic is absolutely and incredibly awesome. Would it be exaggerated if I said the way you write is absolutely perfect? Please write more.... I was really disappointed after finishing chapter 13, because I'd somehow believed there were already 14 chapters. Huh, weird.
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Title: great!
Reviewed By: aikyo On: July 10, 2004 09:46 CDT
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I keep reading this story i i just love it. Good writing and a wonderful story. hope to read more soon
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Title: beautiful poetry
Reviewed By: Count D [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 08:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh my god I love this story! It's great! I've never read anything with such a great story WITH flawless gramar! I give it two thumbs up with an A++ at the side ^_^
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how scared I was when I could no longer find this story on ff.net, I think I cried. Although it has been a while since your last update, please take your time to write the best possible chapters that you can. This story is one of my favorites, and in my demented mind I am convinced that this is the true ending to the manga. Keep up the good work!
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Title: unwilling sleep
Reviewed By: long On: June 24, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story. It is very creative and so good. Please continue with the rest of the story. Speaking of continuing, where or what happens to the next chapter? It has been over a month already. Did you forgot that you have story to finish and please more LEMONADE!!!!! You really know how to get into characters with both Leon and D. I will be waiting for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Meandering [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 02:00 CDT
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One of the best I've ever read. You've brightened up my day, thanks a lot for it!
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Reviewed By: Yami Bakura On: May 29, 2004 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God this is the best Pet shop of Horrors fic I have ever read.... The part with Chris is great. I remeber riding on my dads shoulders as well. But I would defiantly have to say that D takes on the role as a mother then another father...lol... it sounds like how my mother is. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Hatsbox On: May 18, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of GOD, update!! It's so good, it makes me want to weep with happiness.
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Title: Sweet Torture
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 16:22 CDT
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Gah, so much wonderful writing, psychological insight, danger, worry and hilarity. An emotional but exhilarating emotional roller coaster for me and how sweet when Leon finally blurts it out. I'm still smiling. God, that was great!
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