| "The REAL Reason Why Vegeta Took Trunks to the Park" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: 0.0
Reviewed By: PINAS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2006 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD POOR TRUNKS!!!!! BUT IT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN SOONER OR LATER.O.o!!!!!! BY THE WAY NICE STORY!! SOME THING TELLS ME YOU RAN IN WHEN YOUR MOM AND DAD.....
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Title: nice.
Reviewed By: free-sprit, agian again, to lazy to log in.. On: June 21, 2005 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
niiice lemon, weeeeird ending! I thought it was very funny, but I'm not quite sure if that is what it's supposed to be.. I guess it is? But I really loved this fic, and it was funny. Damn funny. Loved it. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutely delicous lemon! ^_^ I enjoyed it and it was also funny.. I especially loved the ending when Trunks burst in on his parents! So great... I haven't read any fanfics in a while..nor have I written any. But this was great and I think I will be reading alot more...and who knows even writing ^_~. Anywho, wonderful fic.
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Reviewed By: Carla121 On: October 28, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so great. It was so different. I loved it!! The end was the best part. Poor Trunks, traumatized for life!!! lol I hope you have written other fics I love your writing style!! ***** 5 stars!!
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
*covers eyes* oh poor trunks..... Trunks: *sees little plastic play house; eye begins twitching* Aqua: awww my poor baby!
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Reviewed By: a_vindicated_attempt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 13:02 CDT
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haha i loved this story...ive read it a few times, and finally decided to leave a review...now i wonder if you could really do it in a little playhouse...*scribbles on notepad* haha ok then..keep up the good work!
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Title: Hilarious!
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 22:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I can't believe you said your stories are not good! That is ridiculous. I loved this! Always it is a treat to read stories that give Vegeta's perspective, not only because of his cynicism, his unwavering loyalty to Bulma, but also because of his humor. Your descriptions a wonderful and they actually place me that as though I can see everything. And of course I enjoyed the lemon, very erotic. Love the ending despite how controversial it is. It had me laughing too hard. Very nicely done! I hope to read more of your fics.
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Reviewed By: pink grl On: May 29, 2004 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a good story, but... you kind of ruiend the happy ending.{shrugs} ...oh well.
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Reviewed By: Getarian On: March 07, 2004 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this! It's been a while since I've read a B/V fic, even though they are my favourite couple, but I was intrigued by the title. Vegeta's a sexy little bugger and the lemon was delish. Very, very funny...I actually covered my face in embarassment when the little house tipped over :-) Loved Vegeta's single worded expletive - it spoke volumes. LOL
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Reviewed By: spini On: February 29, 2004 09:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
really funny! cool
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA(not logged in) On: February 28, 2004 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!!!!!!!!!! U r so funny damn I loved it this was sexy and funny as hell ! Keep writting ! poor Trunks! I'll never look at those lil houses the same way again LOL! LATER!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - not logged in On: February 28, 2004 08:06 CST
Comment/Review:
My God! That was great! Sexy and funny as hell. I am impressed!
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Reviewed By: mona On: February 28, 2004 06:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!! i totally love...poor trunks get to see his parent doing it AHHHHHHH!!! you have a great mind there and please keep writing i would love to read other of your work.
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