Reviewed By: Cleverkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was FUNNY! But your grammar is HORRIBLE! Maybe you should send the next chapter to me so I can edit it. (By the way, Oh is spelled "Oh" not "Ow.) And don't be so strait forward, it's annoying.
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