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Reviewed By: Silvering [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 11:58 EDT
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Oooh I think that ending to Chapter 4 should qualify as a cliffie. How evil. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: Hanoi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, about that next chapter...I love the story so far, what exactly is Seshhou's mom on probation for? Did he get in trouble with the law and she took the heat? DUN DUN DUN!!! More Please!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!! ALL OF YOUR STORIES ARE GREAT!!!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!! *smiles angelically* Purdy please!
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: May 18, 2004 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Niffity! Its only chapter four and I'm hooked. I like how Rin is Kagome's sister. You don't find many story where Kagome has more than Souta for a sib. Not that I don't like Souta, but it just seems that Kagome always needs a sis around. At times I would love to have one, however the chromosomal-gods that be blessed me with brothers (two of them) not that I don't love them but you try explaining the rampaging emotions during a period to males. I digress, good story looking forward to the next chapter. Marcus seems like an ass. Oh bye the way, loved the ending to To Bear Wittness. Sorry I haven't reviewed it, but the first few weeks of May was busy with pinning, graduation, trips to my cousin's and older brother's places. Forgive me?
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 14:33 EDT
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JD: sssssssssfffffff! your killing me!!!! PLEASE POST!!! I WANNA SEE MARCUS GET HIS ASS BEAT BY SESSHO! sessho: as much as that little statement might be true, that time hasn't come yet, and who said it would happen? JD:well... THIS cannot be a kag/marcus and IF it is ::glares at SF:: which i know its not, then i'm gunna kill that falcon! {::all the sudden the movie screen pops up and a comparsion between JD and SF is put up::} JD: ::looks at comparision:: Ook...so the small fact that i'm a pup, shes full grown, shes like tall and i'm not even taller than shippo.... yea that might present a problem...so i won't kill the falcon... ::yells::CiCi! CiCi: ::comes in eating patatoe chips:: what'd i miss? JD: if SF doesn't post you gotta kill her for me! CiCi: ::looks around then down:: oh its you! No hon sorry no can do! JD: and why not?!! CiCi: cause i need her to finish second chance ::walks off to get more chips:: JD: screw you!...::looks around:: Ooo sessho!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hellooo- I just wanted to tell you that I love your story! I was sooooo just really getting into it and then the chapters stop.. DAMNIT! I hate when that happens. Is Kagome limited to any kind of music? Because I can totally see her singing some of Christina Aguilera's songs-- anyway-- keep up the great work-- I'll be adding this to my favorites list so I cannot wait until next time.
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Title: check
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 22:38 EDT
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JD: ::mad at her self:: WILL SOME BODY PLEASE TELL ME WhY THE HELL I DIDN'T REVIEW BEFORE? Kagome: um... i don't know? JD: damnation! TWO FRIGGIN' cliffy's in ONE chapter! SF! how could you do that? Inu-chan: only feather ass could pull that off... JD: -__-' did i ask you? ::shakes head:: anyway! once in your regular chap then again in your author's note! that's BOOTY! Miroku: heh heh booty, hehe.. JD: 0.0... freak of nature. ::shakes head again:: ANY WAYS! WaIT A MINUTE! hold the phone! KAGOME is MOVEING in with MARCUS?!! WHAT THE HELL?? Oy Vey @_@. this inu pup is confuzzled. just what the hell- Sessho: ::sigh:: did you not read the author's note? JD: ::glares:: yea! Sessho: ::muttters:: such a child. then you would know that she said it was a stepping stone. JD: but how- kagome: in other words sessho comes to the rescue.. JD: Ooo Inu-Chan: ::fuming:: AGAIN! with the sesshomaru coming to kagome's rescue! that's me not him! JD: ::rolls eyes:: some body is jealous... Inu-Chan: I AM NOT! it's just... in almost all SF's fics sesshomaru is the good guy... JD: that's one of the many reasons i like her fics... sessho: ::grins:: thanks pup. JD: that wasn't a compliment to you, that was a compliment to SF. Sessho: -___-' JD: 0.0 uh oh
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello again long time no talk... xp..... well anyways i just want to comment on your work... which is always postive ^^..... so you don't have to worry... but why do i have the feeling when kagome moves in with marcus it will be bad o.O.... not unless that is just me... >> ..... < ....... well hope to see you soon.... later ^^
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 17:51 EDT
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Decidedly interesting ^_^ Although I'm fairly sure I'm gonna have to go back and re-read the thing (my bad ... painkillers are sooo distracting). Um, why's it look like Kagome is getting setup to get "rescued" from the jerk? At least at this stage ^_~
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 06:11 EDT
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I love it, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: 1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 03:11 EDT
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Reviewed By: a_r On: May 12, 2004 03:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man talk about a great set up. What a great story. Keep it up. -akuma_river
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Title: Whoopsie!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 20:19 EDT
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Woops. Darn computer made me post the review twice. Sorry about that!
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~PD:Hehe...I just realized I hadn't reviewed in a while. My bad. I loved the chapter. Awww...Sesshy is a mama's boy!! ~Sesshy: What was that, wench? ~PD: Urk, when did he get ther-...*twitch* w-wench!? *eye twitches insanely* ~Inu-chan: Fluffy's in for it now... ~Sesshy: Hmph. What can a weak neko like you do to me, hm? ~PD: N-neko!? ~Sesshy: You are a tiger, are you not? Tigers are related to cats. Of course, YOU wouldn't know that. ~Inu-chan: -___- Fluffy just keeps digging a bigger and bigger hole...Hey, Sesshomaru! Did you forget about that staff of hers? Even worse, did you forget about her wrath? ~Sesshy: Please, she needs a staff to hurt me? Pathetic.... *PD in the background with her eye twitching like there's no tomorow* ~Inu-chan: Oh, yeah...I forgot to tell you. She was training the other day and can now use her powers even without the staff. The staff only makes it hurt more. ~Sesshy: You lie, half-breed. ~Inu-chan: See for yourself then... ~Sesshy: *glances over to PD who is on fire now* Oh, shit. ~PD: Weak and pathetic, eh!? *ZAP!!!* *Sesshy dodges it barely and takes off* COME BACK HERE, FLUFFY!!! ~Sesshy: (while running)As if a slow youkai such as yourself can catch this Sesshomaru. ~PD: WHAT!!?? ~Sesshy: Dammit. Me and my mouth. I'm turning into Inu Yasha. ~PD: *grabs Sesshy's yukata(?)* DIIIEEEE!!! *ZAP!* *PD shoots Sesshy without mercy* ~Inu-chan:-___-' Uh...I think PD wanted me to say...*takes out notecard* "Update really soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next. Love your story and keep up the great work!" *ZAAAAP!! followed by a crispy Sesshy and insane laughter from PD* ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)
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Title: UpDaTe!!!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 20:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~PD:Hehe...I just realized I hadn't reviewed in a while. My bad. I loved the chapter. Awww...Sesshy is a mama's boy!! ~Sesshy: What was that, wench? ~PD: Urk, when did he get ther-...*twitch* w-wench!? *eye twitches insanely* ~Inu-chan: Fluffy's in for it now... ~Sesshy: Hmph. What can a weak neko like you do to me, hm? ~PD: N-neko!? ~Sesshy: You are a tiger, are you not? Tigers are related to cats. Of course, YOU wouldn't know that. ~Inu-chan: -___- Fluffy just keeps digging a bigger and bigger hole...Hey, Sesshomaru! Did you forget about that staff of hers? Even worse, did you forget about her wrath? ~Sesshy: Please, she needs a staff to hurt me? Pathetic.... *PD in the background with her eye twitching like there's no tomorow* ~Inu-chan: Oh, yeah...I forgot to tell you. She was training the other day and can now use her powers even without the staff. The staff only makes it hurt more. ~Sesshy: You lie, half-breed. ~Inu-chan: See for yourself then... ~Sesshy: *glances over to PD who is on fire now* Oh, shit. ~PD: Weak and pathetic, eh!? *ZAP!!!* *Sesshy dodges it barely and takes off* COME BACK HERE, FLUFFY!!! ~Sesshy: (while running)As if a slow youkai such as yourself can catch this Sesshomaru. ~PD: WHAT!!?? ~Sesshy: Dammit. Me and my mouth. I'm turning into Inu Yasha. ~PD: *grabs Sesshy's yukata(?)* DIIIEEEE!!! *ZAP!* *PD shoots Sesshy without mercy* ~Inu-chan:-___-' Uh...I think PD wanted me to say...*takes out notecard* "Update really soon because I can't wait to find out what happens next. Love your story and keep up the great work! *ZAAAAP!! followed by a crispy Sesshy and insane laughter from PD* ~Psycho Demoness~(^..^)
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