| "The present" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: freakieaz On: February 04, 2005 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
your grammer and spelling are awful. you should get someone to edit your stories for you before you post them. i'm sure this would have been a great story if the grammer and spelling were corrected.
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Reviewed By: Way Too Pissed On: October 30, 2004 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
You spel baad. Can't reed noting atol. i fwame e21ur sturi. becuz not goood speelleng.
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Reviewed By: JJade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 21:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi great story this is jjade talking and this is one of the best stories i have ever read.thanx for reading.
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Title: Sapadu
Reviewed By: Sapadu's baby On: June 06, 2004 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your grammar and spelling deteriorated, and that made it really hard to tell what was going on.
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Title: The present
Reviewed By: Sakura91 On: April 22, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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