"Hanami" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: black beauty On: March 02, 2004 08:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Short, sweet and meaningful. Although the part where you mentioned that "He didn't once think that he had been a last resort. The thought never even crossed his mind." Made wonder whether Duo was so sure of Heero or if he was plain naive and lived in blistful denial. After all the more I read it, the more I think that stament was rather ambigous. However I loved this fic and the sheer lenghts that Duo will go for Heero. Keep up the Amazing job. Hey how about a Sequel? Or maybe a prequel to see what Heero was thinking? If you did either or both of them you would be making my day!!
| Reviewed By: Vega-Lume [ member but not logged in] On: March 01, 2004 12:44 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked it, I also liked your disclaimer, boy it sounds familiar... keep writing and Smile, Always Vega-Lume
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