| "How desperat can you get?!" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: June 01, 2004 21:36 CDT
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bitch don't worry english isn't my first but hey people don't give a damn my first lianguage is spanish.anywaydon't bitch and i'll give a damn if you don't write more.
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAIIIII! I LUV THIS FICCY! YAY! YOU ARE SO COOL!
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Reviewed By: Candycorngirl On: May 26, 2004 18:47 CDT
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Hey just started reading and I LOVE IT!!! Hope u upadte soon and hey u really should look at my grammar and spelling before you put yourself down.
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Reviewed By: LightandDarkness4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kool story, and your grammar isn't bad at all! (you havent seen mine that is)
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Title: To All Reviewers ^^
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 06:31 CDT
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Hi, Okay so my grammer isn't perfect?! Well your not perfect either ... please flame at me ^^ i'm very short temperd ^^ and if you don't have anything good to say PLEASE don't anything at all
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: May 06, 2004 05:42 CDT
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no thanks i got 8 guinea pets already plz update.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: May 06, 2004 02:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things are really heating up. Guess that will teach Kagome not to stare.
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Reviewed By: eggsterzZz On: May 04, 2004 19:43 CDT
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your english isn't that bad at all....kawaii fic...so0o0o...about that guinea pig....^^
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Title: lol .. it's kool
Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 10:21 CDT
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love it!!
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Title: U Gotta
Reviewed By: Caitlin On: April 04, 2004 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta finish! It's really good better than my fanfic!!! Please continue!!! Later
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 09:40 CST
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so i take it your not english ... whats your first language? this is a really great staory and i cant wait untill the lemon. i hope that you win against your computer *glares at computer* if you need a beta or anything then just email me at inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com ... by the way my name's Maria .. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You've got my attention so far, so keep going :D Kissing her to get the chocolate was very clever ;)
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Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2004 00:56 CST
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You've got my attention so far, so keep going :D Kissing her to get the chocolate was very clever ;)
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: March 01, 2004 21:28 CST
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I agree with LonelyBunny about having a lower rating. Cute! Not bad english. Adios!
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Reviewed By: LonelyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 23:21 CST
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Hey! Your english is pretty good. I understand what you mean even if it isn't perfect. I think maybe you should lower the rating to a PG or PG-13 though. Anyway cute fic I liked it! So...do I get your cute lil guinea pig now? hehe just kidding ^_^ Keep writing! You should continue this fic it's not bad. :D
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