| "How desperat can you get?!" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: i said i'm ALWAYS on but not ALWAYS there. On: June 13, 2005 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONDOMS YOU MADE HIM PUT ON A CONDOM! *eyes buldge up* U MAD HIM USE A CONDOM THE HELL WITH IT!
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Title: caught by her family! :
Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 04:52 CDT
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i loved it!! but OMG souta saw that and all! the grandpa probly fainted, and the mom probly covered souta's eyes while he is waving his arms about and screaming! lol (i think i ate 2 much sugar as well...) well anyways i think it was great 4 ur first lemon!! (^_^) -black_rose28- ja ne
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Butterflywings On: October 11, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet story, to bad you put it all from Kagome's point of view. But i still like it, your first lemon wasn't even that bad!
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Its me...corinthia!! I loved this story!! It's great and so kawaii!!! The lemon scene was hott...lets just say that corinthia needs to take a cold shower after that! Keep up the excellent work...i only wish it could have been longer...but it was all together excellent!!! ^_^
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Title: wow bt but but
Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it but GOD DAMNIT YOU SHOULDNT END WITH A CLIFFY! sorry :(( crys :(
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Title: suggestion
Reviewed By: ? On: September 01, 2004 10:30 CDT
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ummm ...wouldnt this fic be considered an original instead of AU (alternate Universe) - I just thought you'd like to know since your story - after all - takes place in the feudal era.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 18:29 CDT
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AWWW THATS NOT NICE
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Reviewed By: teenager15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good, i can't wait to read what happens next!
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Reviewed By: sunfire-moondesire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story i like it
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Reviewed By: shorty14090 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 19:31 CDT
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Great fic ! Update soon and have fun in spain ^_^ Chao 4 now.
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Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: July 01, 2004 18:12 CDT
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alright *shrinks in into muse size* i siad i called you bitch in good way not a insult i apoligize if you took it the wrong way wwwwwaaaaaaaaa!!!!! *runaways never to review agian snifle* bye! update though for the other reviewers. i very sorry *wwwwaaaaa!*
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW I WANT A LEMON
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 14:19 CDT
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Thats so cool!!! I horse back ride too!!!!!! WWWWWAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! I want my own horse!!! *scowl* but their too expensive!!!! Anyways, too bad you cant update as often. real pitty. Anyway can't wait till the lemon. Lookin forward to it !!! C YA!!!!
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Title: coments
Reviewed By: Kay C [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far its realy not bad at all keep going and great job
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