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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: March 01, 2004 21:28 CST
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I agree with LonelyBunny about having a lower rating. Cute! Not bad english. Adios!
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Reviewed By: LonelyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2004 23:21 CST
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Hey! Your english is pretty good. I understand what you mean even if it isn't perfect. I think maybe you should lower the rating to a PG or PG-13 though. Anyway cute fic I liked it! So...do I get your cute lil guinea pig now? hehe just kidding ^_^ Keep writing! You should continue this fic it's not bad. :D
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