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Title: Kiss of the Dragon
Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Kiss of the Dragon... a powerful and awesome technique. Jet Li used it in the Movie Kiss of the Dragon. I only just watched it yesterday, so i know where you got it from now. (At least i think i do.) ^_^
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Title: cream's mother's name
Reviewed By: sonicshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really can not be bothered to read all the other reviews to see if someone has already told you but Cream's mum is called Vanilla. Anyway your story is okay i suppose.
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Title: DUDE
Reviewed By: Kijunuah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freekin awesome story! this one deserves to be fourth highest viewed in the Sonic the Hedgehog fanfics of this site! It had all the elements of a kiddy, mushy sorta story, but also the gritty maturity of a Tarrentino-esque film. BRILLIANT!ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! However good the story and the style of writing is, there were alot of mispelled words and that kinda irritates me. And some of the events made me feel a wave of de ja vu a la Shrek. but it is still excedingly original. I aplaud you!
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Title: Just in case you didn't get my e-mail..
Reviewed By: Shadowlover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 16:30 CDT
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Hi there!!! Awesome story!!! May I plz use Robert, Joei, and Pai in a fic I'm writing? PLZ e-mail me with your answer!!!!
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Title: HOLY CRAP!
Reviewed By: TwinBladeZero [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~sniff~ That was the most beautiful ~sniff~ story I have read in my entire ~sniff~ life! You are the Best author in the freakin' world! Heck, you could even write a perfect Amonic coupleing story!!! Way to go! You are the BEST!!!!!^_^ :)
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Reviewed By: Evertide [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While reading, I ran the gamut of emotions. I laughed. I cried (a lot). I got scared. I got angry. I felt pity and relief. Boy, do you know how to pull at the heartstrings. Still, there are some criticisms I have, though they aren't many. I gave an 8 for spelling and grammar due to a few typos and some issues with quotes, but usually it's not a problem. The last chapter and the epilogue are where my main problems with the story are. I know Robert was something that no curse word can summarize, but even though he brought his fate on himself, it's still a damn shame that it happened. (Hmm...too much DBZ for me) Same goes for Vanilla, though I'm inclined to be more merciful to her. In summary, I thank you for writing this and all your other fics dealing with two of my favorite video game characters as a couple, and look forward to reading anything you write in the future. ... I can't think of a better way to express everything I felt while reading than through some lyrics from the song "Invincible" by Pat Benetar: This shattered dream You cannot justify. We're gonna scream Until we're satisfied. What're we runnin' for? We've got the right to be angry. What're we runnin' for When there's nowhere we can run to anymore. We cannot fight to be innocent. Stand up and face the enemy. It's a do or die situation. We will be invincible! And with the power of conviction, There is no sacrifice. It's a do or die situation. We will be invincible!
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Title: Fanfic lover
Reviewed By: SonikkuSL On: October 10, 2004 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, just gotta say, I LOVED THIS! It was amazingly original, and you made it so interesting, i'm a Creils fanatic and i think there's no other coupling that works for either of them. I hope to read more of your works, and i give you an ultra corney Sonic style thumbs up. Congratulations on a job well done.
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Title: Wow!!!!
Reviewed By: Mysterious1ne On: August 11, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's see...how do I start this out? This story was great!! Everything down to the smallest detail. I don't what to else to say. I will say this though, I would like to know more abou this "writers slight of hand". The ending was however a little disheartening...*hold a moment of silence for Vanilla* I ,personally, don't think she deserved to die... nor did I see such a bittersweet ending in the works. but it was a good ending none the less. I'd love to see and or participate in hwat you may have in store...keep up the good work!!!
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Title: Wee hah!
Reviewed By: braynstorm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...I stayed til the end! Very good. Heh...Tails goin all Jet-Li on us at the wedding...I liked that movie so another plus for you. Wouldn't it be great if we could "Kiss of the Dragon" ALL our problems away?! Bwa ha ha... Was everyone in on it? Except for maybe Cream or Robert and his mom? I dunno...it seems like one wouldn't be able to act that convincingly in such a situation. Especially when Tails isn't around. Well...Robert took one for the team either way... Good story...drop me a line if you write something else and I'd be glad to help ya with it if ya want.
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Reviewed By: Moka_Only [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-Bowing down.- We're not worthy We're not worthy.... anyways good story, but I'm sad it's ending.
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Title: Damn man!
Reviewed By: Darkstalker X [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really appreciated this kattx, this has been one of the most touching romance stories i have ever read, i confess, it touched my heart and im telling you, this is gold and if there was a book of this I would buy it, because this is nothing more than art, I wish I had that sense for romance fics... Also, kattx, what did you learned to have that sense for writing romance, I didnt read this because of the hentai, and didnt liked it because of only that, I really see that you made a lot of work into this, I would like to have those feelings, those sentiments, that training you had to write good romance... To say the last thing, thanks for inspiring me, I once read this story when it was by chapter three or sooner, and thats when I started making fanfics, because I know that you made somthign so the people appreciate, including myself, thanks for writing this and thanks God for giving you the life to write this. Sincerely, Darkstalker X
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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: The Vicious One On: July 25, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic had it's ups and downs, but in the end, it ended with such a great feeling. Great job, katro! Do another one sometime! ^__^
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Title: The Ending
Reviewed By: Felouse On: July 25, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ending and yet sad in places but still a good fic as well I would'nt mind reading it again hope to see more of your work thank you for writing a great fic
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Reviewed By: i read this On: July 24, 2004 22:21 CDT
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Good Series. So... Robert and Passion die from the Kiss of the Dragon, Vanilla dies from West Nile, and Cream has kids at her honeymoon? What the hell...? "Them's titty babies!"
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: Felouse On: July 24, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved chapters 20 and 21 cause finally Tails does something and plus you made it look like as if the rabbits compared to other creatures have a different cultures like arranged marriages and tests very creative indeed are you carring on for the epliogue if you are can't wait for it
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Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 04:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this... is it finished? wat was with the test? oh well i liked it. it didn't turn out the way i thought... thank god. TODOMIGAH!!! Creils is cool. hope you do another one... i WILL read it but only if it involves Tails or Cream or even better both. Katts, did i tell you, you are on my fav authers and the only one there. this was cool and enjoyable. i have never read a Fic so enjoyable. thank you for spending your time writing this for us.
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Title: ...YAY...
Reviewed By: the rad red [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 02:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay im glad about that ending ... i predicted it woo im a genious lol anyway i really love you work please dont stop now...will there be a sequal?
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Title: took his time
Reviewed By: the rad red [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 04:17 CDT
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took his sweet time to realise he loved her dident he lol please update soon its the waiting i cant stand
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Reviewed By: The Vicious One On: July 18, 2004 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good building up. Can't wait for the ending! Keep at it! ^__^
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Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: Felouse On: July 18, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still going great this fic also you want to know my predictions with the situation as it is now its hard to tell but if you want a guess well I think that Tails will somehow come to the wedding or Tail's gift to Cream will make her do something thats what I think but can't wait to see what happens
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Title: the maddness!
Reviewed By: the rad red [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 08:20 CDT
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i think tails is ganna come in through the wedding and cream is ganna stop and she isent ganna marry eather(i put thought into this now im in my happy place tikal my fav female charicter ^___^)
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Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 14:07 CDT
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I love this story and don't want it to end they way i'm thinking it will. Robert is a twat and i absolutly hate him. I want Cream to have a happy ending with Tails. This is so interesting. I have read and reviewed your story multiple times now. may i ask if you check ou mine. Sonic::Epilogue. i think you might like it. Thank you.
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Felouse On: July 13, 2004 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"sniffs sniffs" that was so sweet and sad how it all played out I can just this been like a soap opera "sniffles" I was going to give this rating when you finished this fic since it one of my top ten faves (including other fics like the Amy/Tails romance Young Passion) but with the all of your writing, creativity, etc I would like to give this fic the perect 10
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Reviewed By: DrCow On: July 13, 2004 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, this story just keeps geting better and better. Keep up the good work.
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Title: so sad
Reviewed By: the rad red [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 02:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story so much its my current favorate i realy hope tails marrys cream then i will be in my happy place once more
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Reviewed By: Moka_Only [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's about damn time the rich ***hole gets what he deserves. That'll teach him not to mess with anybosy anymore 'cause chaotix don't play that. Great chapter and yes I wasn't a Tails/Cream fan before this but now there clerly made for each other keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: i read this On: July 05, 2004 23:58 CDT
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Hey, I like the Tails/Cream stories you're writing, but I still don't get Tails's "Gold" alter-ego. Could you mention a little about him, 'cause he's just confusing as hell. Thanks. UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Aegis Zero On: July 05, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'BOUT TIME HE GOT HIS ASS KICKED....althoughit should have been Tails who was doing the ass kicking. Also, please elaborate on Vanilla's comment on having the Chaotix rough up tails worse than Robert (which is no easy task). Otherwise, a very good story....and don't keep us waiting for the next chappie TOO long, now...
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Reviewed By: moogle64 On: July 05, 2004 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really reall really really really REALLY love this fic. that last chapter broke my heart as a reader,(and in case your wonderin, im a guy its ok to say stuff thats sincere right? RIGHT!?) anyway PLZZZ update soon!! waiting is as boring as hell and i bang my head on my desk when im bored.
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Title: Chapter 14
Reviewed By: Felouse On: June 30, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats as far as I can see this is getting better the situations I wonder what Tails is going to do and funny meeting for Robert and Rouge plz carry on
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