| "A Creils Story" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Title: tails dead?! DAMN YOU!
Reviewed By: Kiyobi K. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU GET TAILS KILLED?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?! Tails better not be dead, or I'll have your head!! (no not really, but it rhymes) other than that... i liked it. how could you kill tails man?!
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Title: WAAAAA!!!
Reviewed By: tailsfan no 1233210 On: April 12, 2004 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY VERY COOOOOOOOOOL!!!! Please don't take long to continue. unless it is finished which i dout highly. can you please be quick i can't wait to see creams reply. and don't stop writing if anyone gets you down just think it's not like they've done better. keep going. Hurray!. Tails had better come back somewhere along the line and take revenge on robert maybe he can rip his head of, or just negotiate ^_^
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Title: Not bad for Chap. 5
Reviewed By: Espio 2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
(This is The Vicious One from ff.net, just to tell you) Great story, but it sucks Tails got shot down! Please continue, and let this have a happy ending! I love Tailcream!
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Title: Its good!
Reviewed By: Fox Soldier On: April 11, 2004 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its great! Umm, Tails dies at the end of chp 6? Or is there more?
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Reviewed By: Samuraiofsteel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I emailed you a big review and what I think about your writing, but forgot to put my email in their. Aaronmg@adelphia.net. -The Samurai
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Title: This is a good fic
Reviewed By: braynstorm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to the 1st dude...anyway...good job. Nice fic...quite an abrupt ending! Anonymous: no. If they are under age, it's statutory rape. Minors can't make decisions w/out a parent's consent, so they can't *technically* consent. Pedophilia is an adult having sex w/ a minor.
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Title: nice work
Reviewed By: Tziek On: April 09, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack, you had robert shoot tails?? How could you!? I like how the story goes, be sure to update soon! ^_^ P.S. Dont let some of these asshole reviewers get you down. This is one of my fave fics. ;)
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Reviewed By: Anonymous_ On: April 08, 2004 03:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Doesn't this qualify as pedophilia?
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Title: I Like Plot!
Reviewed By: Light Sneasel On: April 04, 2004 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Intresting so Far... I found a few grammer errors, so you might want to reread future posts... So Our girl is in a arranged marrage huh? That can't be good. It also seems Tails is taking it well... so far. Oh well who knows, she might choose to run away? Btw Cream's mom is named Vanilla ^_^
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