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| "Reflections of What Might Be" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 11:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude update, i'm leaving for spring break and when I get back I want to see an update. Sincerely your fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
| Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story plzz update
| Title: The Real Vaoh
Reviewed By: Venomous_Angel_of_Hades [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this it's creative, hillarious, exciting, your a good writer. Minion: Lady Vaoh why are you being so nice to this guy? Lady Vaoh: I thought I'd try it out just once. Minion: so do you like being nice? Lady Vaoh: actually NO I DON'T IT SUCKS SO LET ME TELL YOU IN MY USUAL REVIEWS!!!!!!!!!!! Lady Vaoh: *says evily* I loved it truly so update or I'll send my evil demon armies after you once they've made the twins update on their story so watch your back if I don't see an update. MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *trails off laughing evily* Minion: now that's the Lady Vaoh we know and love. Sincerely your new fan, Vaoh Ta Ta For Now
| Title: Reflections of What Might Be
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: March 05, 2004 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say once again good job, liked the part where miroku kissed sango,just wouldnt be him if he didnt try that you know?hehe. i wonder if the well has any more play with the story? and inuyasha wont be able to talk..hmmmm definetly have me curious there and with kagome still be weak when she wakes up. (pauses) *blushing* you didn't have to do that, but thankyou!! and i honestly meant what i said, its a great story so far, and like my mother would say to me,my sisters,and brother,"come,lets read a story that will take us by the hand and take us off to never,never land." thats what stories i really, really enjoy do for me, so let ME thank YOU. so intel next chapter, may your shinning star shine brightly apon you. trinity
| Title: Reflections of What Might Be
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: March 05, 2004 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've had me hooked on the very first chapter, so hooked infact that i put you on my favorite author list so i wouldnt have to worry about missing a chapter. your doing great! intel next chapter as the spider says to the fly....i could eat you all up. trinity
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