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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it, START WRITING THE SEQUEL!!!or have you, and it turns out i've read it already? that would be creepy. anyway, keep it up ^_^
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Reviewed By: NarakuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh!!! I just finished your story, anfd I have to tell you, It is a work of art!!! I love it!!! I actually quit my other write because my computer broke, but now I am starting a new one. But I love this one and I give it A 10 all the way. Love NarakuLover
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Title: dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was the first one to comment and maybe the last one to too whoot whoot!
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Title: Dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story I have been a hard core fan forever. i am happy with the ending and i cant wait til the sequel...raychan i am one of your biggest fans so never stop writing!!! i know i have been a slacker but I will have a splurge of creativity soon!! I loved reading this story and i will prolly read it a couple more times...much love to you!!!! ^__________^!!!
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Title: Wonderful fiction
Reviewed By: torrieoreo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story a lot. (I have been hooked on Inu-Yasha for the past few months, much to the annoyance of my family. *grin*) I particularly like how your voice carries through in your writing. It has the nice cadences of the way a person would comfortably speak. It also was apparent that you had worked out the main plot line from the beginning, which really made the story hang together nicely. If you ever would like a quick grammar and copy-edit, let me know. (I haven't ever offered that to anybody else, but I really really enjoyed your story.) Congratulations! And get to work on the sequel!
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Title: AAAAAAAAAA
Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 23:10 CDT
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I liked this story a lot... something i noticed [and not to be rude or anything] but whenever you write the word 'past' you spell it 'pass'...
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Reviewed By: Kinata On: July 30, 2004 12:15 CDT
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awwwww....soo....sooo...CUTE^^ YAY!!! but i still dont kno why Yash didnt remember Kagome...it will remain a mystery
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Reviewed By: VirGo Bab of wesy On: July 30, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
udpate now!!! one more chapter to go is all there is! pease? pwease please please? PRETTY please? i need to kno what happened next! will Fluffy even remember Sakura?
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Reviewed By: Kinkata On: July 30, 2004 09:55 CDT
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wha taking you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long?!?!??!? UPDATE!!! I DEMAND YOU!!!!
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Reviewed By: jiji mardi On: July 30, 2004 09:54 CDT
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update already!!!!! pelase you ONLY have 1 more chapter to go!
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Reviewed By: Kikorifan On: July 25, 2004 15:04 CDT
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0.0....NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! the last chapter is commin up!!! updated update update.....please?^_______________^
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Title: dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally awesome!!! cant wait til the next update!!!
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Title: i love ur story
Reviewed By: jaymster On: July 15, 2004 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story 'Hope For a Better Future'!!!!! The 'For Laughs' thing, was genius!!! In the last chapter, I cried. Stupid I know, but it really touched me. You're are a just as good as Rumiko!!!! You're the coolest writer, next to Rumiko!!!!!!!
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Title: dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! awesome chappie Ray chan!! it is so good! im happy your exams are over!! i hope i can get through work and be able to do some morre on my stories!
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 00:57 CDT
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so glad ya updated!! i was like waiting for ages!!! update soon!!!! this is the best fic eva!
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Title: Dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good update as usual!! sorry i havent been on for like ever...i gots a job now
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2004 09:43 CDT
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YAY!!! you updated!! FINALLY!!! thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!!! update soon please!!!
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Title: Yo!
Reviewed By: Leonen On: June 25, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, you had better hurry up and post somemore of this story. I absolutely loved it! I can't stand waiting to much longer!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 22:01 CDT
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can you please upadte? this fic is hott!!!
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Title: Dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!! wow grea plot twists...ooh i love your stories..oh and ii finished another mystery unfolds btw..i think the endng was cute...but not sure...review if you crawl out of your study holeagain^____^
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Title: Dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374(its me i swear:) ) On: June 04, 2004 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:(...awesome...pwease update...sad about sakura seeing bitch kissin fluffy:(...thanks for the props and tellin people to look at my stuff...your in there i added your character I hope you like it Ray-chan...good luck with your stories...ill keep on reading and reviewing^___^
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Reviewed By: NarakuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. I love the over all plot of this story. Your writing is so amazing. How did you ever get this idea? I have a Sakura in my story to. Isn't that funny. I love the Idea of Sesshomaru being somewhat in love and I am glad there are others that don't want to kill my fluffy.
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Reviewed By: crazy mary On: June 01, 2004 18:34 CDT
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AHHH!!! you FINALLY updated!! its been centuries!!! love ya for that!!! please update soon!!
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Title: dgirlie
Reviewed By: seiya374 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi ra-chan great updates as usual...i updated too and i got two new stories...check them out...luv sakura lots....good work...please update!!
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Reviewed By: crazyperson On: May 25, 2004 20:11 CDT
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IM WAITING!!! HELLO!!! YOU READING THIS!!! YOU HAVENT UPDATED YET!! PLEASE YOU GOTTA UPDATE BEFORE I DIE!!! PLEAS PLEASE PELASE UPDATE!!......OR ELSE!!
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Reviewed By: InUyAsHa67289 On: May 21, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best fanfic I have ever read!! make more, i am waiting!
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Reviewed By: kunnai On: May 17, 2004 18:34 CDT
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AHHH!!! you are one of my FAVORITE authors thats aren't updating lately!! so PLEASE just update for me!!
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Title: dgirlie aka Dorina
Reviewed By: seiya374(im not logged in dumb MM) On: May 14, 2004 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey Ray-chan Im not sure if you know my email address but its DPsinger16@aol.com....I love the chapter great new twist...good job...gotta love sesshy!! july..ill try to be patient...ill just work on updating my fics while i wait for you...^_^
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Reviewed By: GUMMY BEARS On: May 12, 2004 20:09 CDT
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wow!! i mean WOW!!! its sooo awesome i'd turn this into a inuasyha movie right now!!! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: reviewer!! On: May 12, 2004 20:07 CDT
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MORE!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! ITS THE BEST FIC IN THE WORLD!!! THAT'S WHAT I DECLARE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PELASE PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS AND UPDATE!!
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