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"Wanna Bet??" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ]
 Title: i guess
Reviewed By: nun special...  On: October 26, 2008 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
i liked the ending it was cute ....ya :D
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 14, 2008 01:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now why couldn't Takahashi have had that kind of outcome with the sake chapters in the manga? Loved it! ^_^
 Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 14, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is so cute! Love the lemon, very well written. :) Heh, I don't know what else to say...Call it speechless. :P Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Ja mata ne!
 Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 17, 2007 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
"He wouldn't notice me if I were naked..." Tsk! Kagome knew something like this would happen, otherwise she'd never agreed to the bet! A girl does not skip around naked if she really holds a fear of rejection, especially not in front one she loves. But by all means... it's hard to accept the insight that one is loved and desired, so that bet was a needed push. That's what makes this fiction so good: one can read out a lot betewwn the lines and know that even Sango know's for sure Inuyaha desires and loves Kagome. A juicy lemon, a sweet love and the most cute ending!
 Reviewed By: Kittenprophetess(to tired to sign back in)  On: April 12, 2006 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was a really great one shot. I enjoyed it quite a lot. However, I noticed one mistake. In the story you said that Inuyasha stopped his 'menstruations' implying that Inuyasha had stopped his period. I thought it was really funny but I know that had to have been a mishap in spelling, I think you were trying to spell ministrations. Other than that it was excellent. I'm not trying to be all 'you spell all this wrong' I just caught the mistake. I make a lot mistakes myself.
 Reviewed By: BloodRed567 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
write more. *laughs* awesome lemon.
 Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 02, 2004 23:03 CST
Comment/Review:
*laughs* Gotta love it...I love 'bet' fics. Well done!
 Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 02, 2004 15:45 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sweet Lemon!! Nice and origional plot. 4 Stars!
 Reviewed By: theMaven [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2004 23:31 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was cute :D
 Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 01, 2004 19:19 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love it you should write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!

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